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As We Dream |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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And now we've loved; rest with your dream in mine Love, stress, cares and concerns all put to sleep. The night turns on, the stars move round Polaris Your sweet sleeping form is pure beside me Only you, will sleep in my dreams. We'll go, Together, over waves to tropic shores. You alone travel through these dreams with me, Ever you, evergreen, ever love. I watch your hands, fingers uncurled, at peace I sense the day's cares drifting away; Your eyelids closed two dark feathers lying We float down to a waterfall, cascade The folded water carries us away. The night, the fates, spins out our destiny. Yet with you, I am your dream, you are mine And only that, and that is all needs be |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so beautiful Wilfred. I must read more of yours. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Victoria- I am so glad you as a new poet here chose to respond - thank you  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! I especially liked your last verse sir!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--You do write the most beautiful love poems!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is pure beautiful romantic style. I especially like the "uncurling fingers", a definite sign of complete relaxation. Very well done, sir... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Wilfred, I loved this one! Such a soothing feel to it. Beautiful! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Poet deVine - Sometimes the last verse is the hardest - this time I had it early - go figure ~G~ Thanks - I just fixate on someone lovable and fantasize ~G~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie- You say the nicest things - I'm most grateful for your kind words and unflinching support Balladeer- I'm most appreciative of your encouragement - thank you Tennessee Angel- anyone whoe deals with preschooler- is a saint in my book - my son dates steady a Daycare lady - i want him to bite the bullet~G~ 0- Thanks so much |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Gloriously perfect love poem. Ah to be loved like this... catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WilfredYeats~ Oh, I do like this ! 'rest with your dream in mine' 'fingers uncurled' Ah ..... peaceful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Mr. Wilfred Great love poem. It expresses the closeness that two lovers may share. Garfield |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
CatalinaMoon- you express my sentiments as well - a fantasy - but with some scant memries Thank you~S~ Marge - sometimes I find better words - sometimes I lay gasping I'm glad I found some right ones for you ggrn we can - at least for now - only dream - perhaps they will come true thank you~S~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This man's poetry will always inspire me to dream both day and night, beautiful! |
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