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Rain - a haiku
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Rain - a haiku |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Gentle rain falling a mist fills the cool night air and the clouds fall down |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this is so lovely |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lakewalker~ I just love the rain and this is beautiful.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Gentle rain falling a mist fills the cool night air and the clouds fall down Shades of gray cloaked her A blending of moods assured Weighted, her mind walks M... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful images you brought to my mind thank you  |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was very nice. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you everyone for your replies! I appreciate them |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LakeWalker~ Sky shaded in gray Clouds hold the impending mood Reigning down on me *Thanks for the inspiration with your delightful Haiku. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Like the rain, your haiku is very soothing and lovely! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
~Lakewalker~ Gentle rain falling a mist fills the cool night air and the clouds fall down Shades of gray cloaked her A blending of moods assured Weighted, her mind walks sky shaded in gray clouds hold the impending mood reigning down on me. waiting in the dark the rain is pouring out clouds are running on "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Delightful work... regards, sudhir |
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