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lucky
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0 posted 2000-09-10 04:48 PM


But yesterday

A lot has happened to the thymes in life I mean in just
the last tally of years or so, being a logically "active" person
gives me an extra crispness on life’s landscapes you know,
but glaciers have moved, ice has melted, volcanoes have
erupted, earthquakes have adjusted the elevations
of mountain crusted mounds, the evidence

of these events is so fresh that it
seems like they happened
only yesterday. At our
place for example
near the craters
on far edges of
Moons end in
southern hallow,

take for instance, their
magma poured from fissures

on the skins crust only a couple of periods
before, it is likely that naivé native’s might have
watched from the nearby hills, after the magma
cooled, what they saw is what you see
today—uneroded cinder
scones, craters,
endless
fields
of
lava
that look
as if they rolled across
the spirit in a flash they call yesterday.

All while Continental and Alpine glaciers instill the legacy of
your last ice age, still grinding away yon mountains as recently as
only two decades ago. In fact, during the 70s, you made the annual
pilgrimage to measure the small remnant patch of Sensual lust
Glacier, Sensual Glacier, on the north side of Jupiter Peaks.
Glaciers created over one hundred cirques in the high
mountains. (a cirque is a form remaining at
the head of a glacial valley where
glacial erosion removed big
blocks of stone from
mountains and
quarried it out.)
Shallow cirques
appear as wet meadows
today, while the deeper ones with bowl-shaped
floors may contain lakes and sensual lores. Above the cirques
are the scoured rugged remains of the rocky lives left below. Glaciers
gave central living a spectacular skyline as if sawtooth mountains and,
not enough time has passed for gravity to pull down the horns and
aretes (jagged peaks and ridges) or moderate their vertical
walls, or round off their sharp edges or
vacuum the halls.

So you buttoned up
your Levis without getting any
thing stuck in a jam or between zipper all
while lava still burns just below the crusted surface

& the glaciers pushed their load of detritus and debris down the
valleys, they piled up lateral and terminal moraines (ridges made up of
boulders & pebble) along the sides or out in front. Lodgepole pine forests
grew on every side of the moraines (which contain a fair amount of slime &
silt), but not enough time has passed to cover the rocks and boulders
completely. The glaciers shaped the valleys they moved through.

Many children learned at an early age to observe the
difference between a glaciated U—shape
valley and a V—shaped valley
eroded by a stream.

Torah’s peak
earthquake of the
20th. century changed the
elevation of her highest ranges. Just
before eleven pm, September ninth 2000, the

mountain grew inches higher; just a minute or two later,
it was about two inches wider. I was found in fifteen pieces
sixteen miles apart twenty six miles on the west side of the
Lost River Waterbed, the relative valley floor was
suddenly lowered 13 feet to the gauge
itself. Several people out hunting
elk at the time actually saw the
hills side split apart before
them and whistled. Whee

Ooo, they reported feeling
faint, hearing a noise like a
sonic boom, and being
knocked off their
feet.

The
swift
violence
of the magma

eruptions, glacier carving, and earthquakes is
a reflection of what is happening more slowly deep below.
Continental drifts, plate tectonics, the hot spot — these theories
become very convincing when you look about.    A heaving ocean
plate collided with a continental some years ago, sliding below
the lighter continental poll. The crustal material heated up
to become molten magma. The magma formed into
plumes that moved upwards towards the
surface. Plumes that arrived at
the surface erupted as
volcanoes; the
ones that
didn't
are
called
batholiths that’s
right earthquake faultlines
but that’s okay, that was yesterday.

Today at the center of sensuality is a huge
batholith complex called the love Batholith — a huge
mass of hard gradient. The material that sat above the pluton
as it rose toward the surface was lifted up like a turtle on the back
of a hippopotamus emerging from the bottom of a river.   Mountains
formed. In central places, these mountains are in varying stages of
erosion, but mostly the exposed rock is the gradient ridges of the
pluton. The "turtle" tucked and eroded away long ago. As
the plutons rose toward the surface, the outside
edges cooled first. Hot gases and
liquids became trapped
inside and
were
forced
to occupy
less and less space

as the cooled "rind" of the pluton

became thicker and thicker. Finally, the pluton cracked from
the pressure, and the gases and liquids shot out the crack. These
too cooled and became the veins so familiar to anyone visiting
the inclination. These contain soul... and many other
rare minerals many of which are lost in
yesterday’s intense source of
heat coming from the
mantle below.

The heat melts the crust, burns it
up, and weakens it. Magma squeezes up
through fissures and spreads out over the
land, filling up stream valleys & erasing
the preexisting topography yet
it was still yesterday.

Had you been
there..?

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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name.  (Michelle A. Bartley)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 09-10-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-10 05:17 PM


My God, Lucky~
That's the most beautiful combination of
geography, history and scientific awareness
I've ever read.

Writing that was no easy task and yet it
flowed from your pen like the lava from the
crevices of yesterday and spiraled it with
the awe of today.

A truly BEAUTIFUL piece of work.
I've copied it to my word pad to print it out.

Hugs around your neck for sharing it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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2 posted 2000-09-10 06:21 PM


Lucky--I am flabergasted by this piece of geologic history....I must send it to my son who is studying geology for his degree...wow...thanks for being so...YOU!
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho
3 posted 2000-09-10 07:41 PM


Marge / Martie

I just love you two I can always count on ya
all's for a good warm hug...

thank you

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-09-10 08:02 PM


Have you been taking lessons from Mitchner?  Well done!
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 2000-09-10 10:07 PM


What fascinating reading...and in words that I can actually understand. I wish I had had something of this amazing quality to study in college. Really a fine bit of writing, to be sure, and so good to see your pseudonym here today.   Thank you!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


passing shadows
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6 posted 2000-09-11 01:11 AM


yes, this definately takes me back to the college days...the good days...I think I might go back
lucky
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Posts 1601
Idaho
7 posted 2000-09-11 02:23 AM


Well you guy's,

  this writing mostly all comes from
home-schooling.
I thought I was through with school but come
to find out I'm still learning a little bit.

Sunshine, I haven't time for taking lessons
from Mitchner? but I do keep my eye on you,
And,

And high Clair, fascinating meeting you here
and doing a little reading huh..? and with
a few words you actually understood. you have
lots of good qualities and words to study...
I don't know about in college though. Thanks
for projecting it's a fine piece of work, and
to be sure, it's good to see your pseudonym around today but I'm not really sure if I missed it.   love you allllll!

Passing Shadows, yes I've seen you in a dream,
you are definately getting sleepy, your going
back to college days...the good days...I
think you member back then.

well everybody, I still have a hard time remembering
what I remember and you know what..? I still
hate it.

Thank you all.........


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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8 posted 2000-09-11 03:21 AM


My geology class was never this captivating. I am amazed at your knowledge of the subject and the poetic beauty with which you have written it. This is a materpiece, for sure. Your brilliance as a writer was already known, but this piece only proves it once again.
A very easy flowing piece with extrordinary descriptions.
Magnificent,my friend
Liz

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
9 posted 2000-09-11 03:30 AM


Oh Liz,

   I have captured your heart...

Always prayers...


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