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Where I fly
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Where I fly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where I fly In the bright of the night When clouds play with light. Nymphs seem to dance Where the shadows enhance. And the wind in its way Sets the movement in play As visions appear That are clearly unclear. Gestures of grace Thoughts made of lace. A stage that hangs snow A strange mistletoe. It is here I romance With my mind in a trance The whimsy of dream Fulfillment of seem. It is here that I fly Just my lover and I. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a lovely flight, Seymour... I wanna fly too... regards, sudhir |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
True and to the point. I like it!!  --Chibi |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I'm sure you can fly, thanks. Chibi, Thanks for the read and like. |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
thank you for that refreshing little lapse of reality. Unrequited love sucks. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Tabin... Yours is a dream within a dream... a read with the perfect air and the lightest touch. A nice feeling. My compliments. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, I was going to pick out a part that struck me as "the best" and I would then be silly, posting back your entire piece here...love it! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
So pretty, Seymour. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, if you fly over Rock Island, be sure to wave. I wouldn't want to miss it! I DO like the poem, though. Your poetry's flying high for sure. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A soft and graceful piece, Brillant writing from a brilliant poet. Your words are like magic before my eyes, as world of poet Gods, is where you fly. Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beowulf, You welcome and thanks for the read and comment. Andrew, Very nice coment, thank you. Sunshine, Thank you for the love it. *L* Claire, Thanks for the pretty. Balladeer, Flew over your house 2  o pm where were you?Thanks. Nate, Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This definately deserves a bump to the top my friend!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Thanks for the dance. . . with wings  Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I so enjoy reading your poetry. Did I ever tell you that I share your verse with my poetry group ... they are enthralled. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tennessee, Thank you for the read and bump. HM3, You are welcome to the dance. Marge, You are really something, I am honored. *L* |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is divine! glad i stopped in to read.....cause i now leave with wings! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I haven't been able to spend much time on the forum and this one almost slipped by me. This is such a beautiful poem, I think one of my favorites, and I'm so glad I found it Liz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sy, I hope that you are still flying. You are very missed. Your poetry always struck me as gentle and beautiful. You have taught me a lot as I read. Alison |
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