Open Poetry #9 |
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Cranberry Leaves |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas ![]() |
Cranberry Leaves Skipping lightly through fog-filled air, rose-petal scent, lavendar sky, holding hands, just you and I touching, touching, cranberry leaves, sweetly tart, reddish fruit, forbidden not, where our love took root. Settling down in grass filled glades, mahogany leaves, broadsword blades, sofly, softly, touch our legs; rose-petal scent, lavender skies dappled water, shades of blue, custard clouds, golden sun, my what days I've spent with you. W. James Beard, Jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
You paint a nice picture with your words. Thank you for letting me see what you see. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks for the kind words, and the read, my friend. jwesley |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'm a sucker for imagery...and this is incredibly beautiful! I love the flow...exellent work! ![]() *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ 'my what days I've spent with you.' Indeed - indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks folks, this type of "love" is a new style for me...only written two this way so far, this and "Flowers In The Sky", and intend to do more as they are really "fun" to write. Again, thanks jwesley |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A delightful portrait of freely given love. Really nice! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beauty |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is what I am talkin' about. Every poem is special to me. You are such a wonderful poet. A |
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