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Lady Lynn
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Lady Lynn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LADY LYNN” Over there are those magnificent mountains, And over here is this beautiful stream. It was indeed a magical moment, When your deep blue eyes started to beam. I’ve only known you for a little while, Your so adorable, my lady Lynn. I need the love that you have given me, In so many ways, that we can only both win. We lay next to the stream as it babbles, Feeling the soft breeze blowing over our skin. The fiery passion we feel for each other, To anyone else it would certainly be a sin. My head lies on your soft tender breasts, They have rid me of my painful sorrow. And you have given me the strength, So maybe now, I can see tomorrow. This tranquil evening night is so silent, And I hear your soft voice faintly call. I’ll always be here for you my lady, And until the end of time, give you my all. My sweet, sweet darling, my lady Lynn, My timid heart has fallen in love with you. But I can only tell you in a poem, Because I can’t say it out of the blue. Bill Charles |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
how sweet Bill to tell her in a poem only you could write... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thank you Paula for your kind words. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... This is quite beautiful, and touching......I hope she appreciates you! I have but one goal in life....... Not to have just 1 goal in life!! ~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~ |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill "This tranquil evening night is so silent, And I hear your soft voice faintly call. I’ll always be here for you my lady, And until the end of time, give you my all" Very touching and gentle - spoken from the heart. Lucky lady! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, I always feel like I'm repeating myself when I reply to your poems... but what can I say.. beautifully romantic. rosepetals |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovingly written! Corinne |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Thank you for coming by. And I hope that she appreciates me too!! Hi "dd"...How are you? Thank you for your kind comments, and yes, spoken from the heart. Hi rosepetals25...Always nice to see you come by, and to thank you for your generous comments. Corinne...thanks for the kind comments, and for stopping by. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I think I've found a man who writes as romantically as I. Maybe more so - you're a true treasure to read Bill |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Wilfred, I do thank you for the most gracious comments. As a matter of fact, they have made my day. Thank you again. |
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