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Open Poetry #9

Parts Of You

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 01:34 PM

Parts of you scattered across my memory.

Like letter keys on a keyboard.

Hands typing, keys flowing to form words perfectly.

As memory flows to form love perfectly in the heart.

Other times letters jumbled on the keyboard.

As parts of your memory create a perfect turmoil in my memory and in my heart.

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

1 posted 2000-08-08 02:12 PM

i do so like this, very well imaged and writen.......

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-08-08 02:37 PM

Gemini,
this has nice images and even nicer flow...

regards,
sudhir

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-08-08 03:41 PM

Gemini...
         You do have such a way with words!!
          I like the image this created in
                     my mind....
         sometimes perfectly smooth,
               sometimes perfectly jumbled!!

                  Great work, my friend!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2000-08-08 09:37 PM

Michael, Sudhir and Sunny, Thank you for reading, I'm honoured that you liked.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-08-08 09:48 PM

well I can relate to this...my love life being much like my typing...backspace backspace backspace LOL

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