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The Talking Circle |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Talking Circle Hand to hand Chin to chest Prayer in heart Live God’s test To converse Young to old Meek to bold Words of gold Hidden among Each word's sliver Skeins of silver And silence delivers Thought Preciously wrought From spoken word God is heard. 7 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, This is a divine ray of light.... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Sudhir... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Superb---what else can I say but simply that. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can think of many things you might say Mark, but this suits me fine! Thank you!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Well said. really enjoyed the poem "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Positively uplifting read ... wonderful Sunshine, thank-you!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, Power packed and so well written. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is deeply spiritual Sunshine... the transition form word to thought is very special it truly describes how faith is built. Marvelous loved it all! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, Kit, Alle', Ethome...thank you all. This did not start out as spiritual, but it certainly ended up that way. Now, back to the drawing board... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is such an illuminating verse, Sunshine...so enjoyable to read. Thank you ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
uplifting and spiritual and lovely even if its not how you meant it to be |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Claire, thank YOU for coming in to read! Paula, thank you for your kind words - everything happens for a reason! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Karilea---allow me to introduce myself---my name is Mark Christopher for sure....and I now have many more words for you as the party helped loosen me up....(shy somewhat) until I have that raspberry tea.LOL Wonderful...inspiring...beautiful...lovely...caring...excellent...amazing...and of course talented....now as for the poem it was superb as I said.  just wanted to read one more time and introduce myself as I found out you didn't know who I was. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like a crystal clear stream. Corinne |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Laughing riotiously out loud at Mark Christopher Bohannan!!! What a hoot! But thanks for coming back and explaining to me in your silvered tongue fashion just how wonderful you are! Corinne, thank you for coming in to read! Are we all having fun yet!? or should that be...still??? Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine.... I can only ditto what has been said above this reply!! I am still a fan...your work is sheer ispiration, and always brilliant!!! I have but one goal in life....... Not to have but 1 goal in life!! !~~ Sunny ~~! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1 - so glad to see you...your pieces fly by so fast, I have to go hunting for them... see you soon! |
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