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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
If I have no more love to give And I refuse your tender touch, If I can not speak gentle words When you have given me so much, When there's no sparkle in my eyes When yours are shining bright for me, Then I must go and set you free For I am blind, though I can see That I am lost in misery. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
wolfie...wolfie...wolfie. It is SO good to see you again. Welcome back, my friend, and in fine style, too! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I've been trying to put into words some of these exact thoughts. Nice touch! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If I have read a better poem tonight it was probably written by YOU! Found you again! Nice to see you here sir!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I hope that each and every one of our Passionate friends finds their way to your poetry, Wolfie... Folks, Wolfgang has been a member here since before the beginning of Passionate time... and he's one of the best..  How about you treat all our new friends to some of your great works, my friend... Give us some reposts, OK???... You'll have lots of new readers here... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I would love to read more from you as I am a new, new to passions and new to you. So, please share. I love the then I must go and set you free For I am blind, though I can see I am glad I found this, if only one would set free at this point......not all do. A lovely read.  Jenn E |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
been a while since we have been graced by your poetry... wonderfully written. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wolfgang~ this is so very tender. Loved it. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Too good my friend. Such beauty in your words that have deeply touch my heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WolfGang~ Indeed, indeed ! I've visited your web site .... Oh, my what pleasure in the treasure's I found. Looking forward to seeing some new posts from your talented pen. Anything that makes Balladeer happy ... spreads to my smile ! I know how much he appreciates fine poetry writing .... please share more with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Oh how short yet powerful are your words. It is indeed such a confusing topic...when one dries of love and the other is wet. What should happen to these lovers? Such a poem evokes so much conversation, great poem. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
where's that wolfgang smile yuh seriously oman this was great wolfster come back see us more often |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful and tender. A great late nite read Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A very touching poem...love the style you wrote this in...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wolfgang, Agree with Nan there are so many new people here, you should. This poem is one of a kind. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh I am so glad I went searching this morning...what a great story you tell here |
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