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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-09 01:25 AM


Slipping Into ... Comfortable

I still believe he doesn't hate me  
and still loves me in some kind of way.
Maybe it's denial and I will find out I'm wrong
As tonight's note had this to say

This isn't working, I really love her
And she loves me that way, too.
We can't be away from each other like this
I will return Saturday evening to you.

I'm not going to forget our agreement
And will continue to work and complete
Will finish what has been promised
I'm NOT going to abandon you!!!!
signed Pete


To have wakened from sleep to silence.
To have checked on, a note only, found
These thoughts running over and over in mind
In dreaming my wantings, I'll drown.

Another dark moment occurs in my life
This diary is filled with extremes.
As of this moment, I'll call it a night
Slipping into something comfortable,
My Dreams ....


M
9*2k


© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2000-09-09 03:35 AM


~This was written with powerfull emotions. I enjoyed it a great deal..Penned brilliantly!~

~Cherie~

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
2 posted 2000-09-09 03:39 AM


So sadly penned - we share that - refuge in dreams
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-09 05:43 AM


A diary filled with extremes
and a lady slipping into
something more comfortable
in her dreams...
Enjoyed reading this...and
I hope you are well...James

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-09-09 11:09 AM


~Cherie..poerful? well I am trying to hold my life together and am having tremedous outside interference...

but  I think I can handle it or at least I hope so
~~soft  smile
Maureen

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