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Bathe Me In The Sky
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Bathe Me In The Sky |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Bathe Me In The Sky Bathe me where the air is free and tastes of passion fruit, where sprinkles fall and blanket thee and sparkle from within. Bathe me where the twinkles dance and radiate the nights, where tickles play and smiles chance and giggle with the moon. Bathe me where the covers lay and gently warm inside, where eyes are wide and happy stays and weightlessness is free. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please in skies of moonlit beams. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please where realities are dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Spitfire...This is the first time that I have come by your place for a read. I'm glad that I did. The two sentences below are very striking to me. I'll be by again to read another. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please in skies of moonlit beams. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please where realities are dreams. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Spitfire, ohhh I really liked this.. I'll bring the sponge, and you bring the suds and meet me by the river in the moonlight..... Parker |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
MMMMMMMMMMMMM Spitfire, I know exactly what you mean  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Bathe me where the twinkles dance..." Y'know, that just sounds very appealing... This is lovely and playful Spitfire...you just keep bringin' 'em on... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bathe Me In The Sky Bathe me where the air is free and tastes of passion fruit, where sprinkles fall and blanket thee and sparkle from within. Bathe me where the twinkles dance and radiate the nights, where tickles play and smiles chance and giggle with the moon. Bathe me where the covers lay and gently warm inside, where eyes are wide and happy stays and weightlessness is free. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please in skies of moonlit beams. Bathe me, bathe me, won't you please where realities are dreams. Oh WOW....I know just the place....in a hidden pool of shimmering gold moonlight at the base of a green velveted waterfall.... Beautiful read....I loved it tremendously. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Oh, now talk about lovely ... !! This is it ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely place it is, this place that is made of words...beautiful imagery and sensory feel. Loved it! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
loved this one... very well wrtiien... great use of words... If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Spitfire, this is pure beauty...I am enchanted by your words. Exquisite scene woven here, I enjoyed it greatly.  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is gorgeous! ah, what a smile this has brought to my face! grinning, ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is a treasure, to be sure. I want to be bathed like this! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is an extraordinary piece! Love your poetry!! Ssssee ya at the top! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I ADORE this sweet, happy, softly sensual poem such creative imagery... this is so PERFECT spit-gator  one of my favs now by you... going in my file under S for SMILE so nice to see ya posting in open... ya gotta come out of the dark sometime later-take a moonbath-gator jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
what a lovely image you have created... never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Super! Spitfire....bathe me with more of your beautiful poetic lines and cleanse my soul and mind....very well done! |
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