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Cinquains For A Winters Day ( for those downunder)
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Cinquains For A Winters Day ( for those downunder) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Cinquains For A Winters Day To Love To warm your heart To say the words with touch To know that every feeling is Special Special Hearts, one to one Beat each others rhythm Lifeline needing, constant feeding To Share To Share The Hushing sounds Of silent offerings Gifting in tenderness, to each, Their Love Their Love Affectionate Never wavers in cold Seeks the flame of passion, to light Each Night Each Night In arms, beheld A richness, one embraced Just a glimpse of eternity To Love (a cinquain round) Maureen *2K |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Well it was a cold day in Melbourne  But those were warm and lovely words. thanks for sharing them!"A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
This is very nice for us aussies! (hi there to Tess in melbourne...im a Perth girl!) "To share The hushing sounds Of silent offerings Gifting in tenderness, to each, Their love" once again...youve shown that beautiful soul of yours!  ~Dawn< !signature--> whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well, maureen, I am not down under nor am I up above the clouds sky high but I will tell you that this poem I did very much enjoy...  regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Tess I am glad you stopped by to warm up bit ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dawn...thank you for all your kind words...once I learned your name I couldn't resist my morning poem and being inspired by it hope you enjoy what I posted for you, princess ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir thank you ~~very much Maureen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, one of my best friends has been adopted by your country. LOL. So all things Australian bring back loads of memories, anyway I am going stop myself from reminiscing about my friend who I haven't seen in almost a year. A big AAHHHHH from the crowd. A wonderful poem, beautifully written. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Very beautifully done.... Enjoyed this very much Maureen... thanks S. [img]http://www.geocities.com/ericb52/Sign.gif[/img] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very well done...looks like a lot of thought and work went into these. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brian...glad you enjoyed it... thinking of friends isnt such a bad thing is it? Steve..thank you for reading and commenting ~~soft smiles to both of you Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jamie actually cinquains are rather easy and fun...they make you get rid of all unnecessary words ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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