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Was, Is, Will Be
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Was, Is, Will Be |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Was, Is, Will Be Verdant grasses kissed by spring's sun in the span of so long ago tenderest of shoots have sprung flowers burst in rosette glow as the days passed into dark the love within us set a spark summer sun lent its heat at its zenith in rainbow prism robin's song sung so complete in the heat flashed criticism as the days passed into dark the love internal set a spark fall fell fast in leafed nobleness as the gray blended with your hair there was comfort in arms and kiss as souls walked that path there as the days passed into dark the love between us set a spark enfin in winter's calm crystalline day our last moments spent in clarity allow me one last trice to say loving you was a wondrous rarity as the day passes into dark love eternal was the spark. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 7 August 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This makes twice I have seen the word verdant used at passions in which it works. (the other was christophers).. Outstanding writing Sunshine!! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Truly beautiful words. Your talent really shines with this one. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW Karilea, This has all that I could ever dream of writing... flow, imagery, rhyme, heartfelt words.... ah so lovely... there is only one... that is the sun... regards to you this morning, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Prometheus, no verdant with envy here...LOL! Thanks! Wolfgang, how nice of you to come in to read...thank you... Sudhir...all discriptive words are welcome...thank you... |
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