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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
She cries upon the alter of what she thinks is life. She cries for what she's after and sees the fading light. Through her tears she sees him walking in a cloud of dust. From far off distant places he has come to take her heart. And yet the die are thrown for all the world to see. Of family and her children and the smiles that this brings. Through her tears she wonders when it will finally be her time. When will someone love her like the one who has her heart. So she stands upon her silence as the river of time slows. Just to listen to her heart beat and how her love should flow. As she sets it free of her pain she looks into the wind. Of a man who follows his heart so that they both begin again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So she stands upon her silence as the river of time slows. Just to listen to her heart beat and how her love should flow. As she sets it free of her pain she looks into the wind. Of a man who follows his heart so that they both begin again. ====================== unselfish love will be rewarded.. this i know.. this i can promise... winds blow in many directions... Hey Michael...your poets heart is showing again...*smile* later-sweet-gator jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Michael.... 'through her tears she wonders when it will finally be her time...' This is a touching poem, beautifully written and bittersweet! Nice Job!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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