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Five by Six
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Five by Six |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Five by Six To languish In your arms To realize Heaven’s charms On our island Just five by six Brown eyes The shore you be Green eyes A calm sea On our island Just five by six Life is graced By your kind face My hand in yours Wishes assured On our island Just five by six New dreams made Memories recalled My hair now white You’re a bit bald On our island Just five by six And when it is very Alone and solitary Its brown eyes that be In green eyes at sea On our island Just five by six. 7 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a killer metaphor this is Five by Six... Karilea, this is splendid... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, it liked me, too! Thanks!... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir said it so well....I don't know how I missed this earlier but I am so glad I caught up with it....it is truely amazing the vision and talent you have. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunshine, this is wonderful! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, Meadowmuse, thank you for catching this before it hit the archival bottom! Glad you both liked it. |
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