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Serenity's Passions Plea (#2000)
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Serenity's Passions Plea (#2000) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Entranced, I sought the golden spike. A meadowmuse, sang songs I liked. A darkened Prince, held bloody pen-- a beckoning-- I wandered in. I spied a Dove, White wings of love, and squirrel of black, stood guard my back, A butterfly, with sorrow's eyes, another sighed, but would not cry. Beneath a tree, sat Cherokee, arranging sands of poetry, as wisdom's words, I gently heard: "Becalm your fears," urged Balladeer. Rex Allen wrote in ink of smile-- he walked with me, the night's long mile. Walt, he always made me think-- sipping cup of laughter's drink. Lord Christopher (enchanted her) his eyes so like the sky... Martie, dee, and PdV wiped tears from my heart's eye, as owl hooted sweetest dirge, I pondered love, and every word. I saved them all, to save my soul-- every verse more dear than gold. And even though I came to play, if Ron won't mind, may I please stay? *Even though you may not find yourself in this--know that this rest is written in my heart...thanks to you all... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful! CONGRATULATIONS!! on your 2000 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
big yuhs and thanx for includin me you are a cherished part o passions to all sen girl happy 2000!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful sentiments and I congratulate you on your 2000th post.....what a way to show your appreciation.....giving this milestone to all at Passions....wonderful just wonderful.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
YEAH a lovely poem to commemorate your 2000 CHEERS AND CONGRATULATIONS... regards to you O Serene One sudhir... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
>>~~~~~~~> ~Serenity~ <~~~~~~~<< From the heart of this Cherokee I take this sweet opportunity To thank the spirits up above for sending you with your sweet love Your gift among the circled friends Is the treasure of your pen Always knowing tales you're telling are serenity bound of magic 'spelling' Talented thoughts personified Proudly this Cherokee stands by your side With your smile you've hit the mark Landing in this Cherokee heart Proud I am of you as punch ! Gosh I love ya' a WHOLE DARNED BUNCH ! Of course it always seems to me You spread the charm of ~Serenity~ Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ a/k/a ~*Mom*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your appreciation for your fellow poets is shining brightly...nice 2000. James |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Nice serenity. Should help start my day brighter today. Great poem for your 2000th Rich |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~serenity, Congratulations on your 2000th. A treasured poem to celebrate with. Keep up the beautiful writting. Beth~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I hear your plea for poetic dignity yes this place ... 'tis our saving grace by our words we're all bound soulmates, and twins found inspiration, gods gift poetic ashes we sift quiet comfort in dark of night poetic contentment's guiding light poets pen and heart in hand words of love and loss we all understand poetic tears for all to cry hear my words, my whispered sigh i hear your songs, i feel your plea, kiss sweet fate, dance with destiny ride the wind, steal the moon, mornings light returning soon looking south, me twin I see blowing kisses to my sweet serenity me loves ya me sweet twin of my heart... heres to 2000 more... *raising mug of raspberry tea*  *winkie winkie* me < !signature--> There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, This is so wonderful, you are trully a poet and 2000 WoW congrats, may you go on to infinity  Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are all graced by Serenity, long may you post! Congrats on your 2000! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
you touch on all our needs and desires here in this glorious 2000th...i only hope i can write as well when my time comes...thank you Serenity never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Serenity* Congratulations!!!! You entered 2000 with the grace that only you have...beautiful and full of the reasons why we all stay. The beauty and sorrow of your words has often left me in amazement of your talent and I among so many others here feel that you complete this family...Many thanks to you for the tears and the smiles that you have shared....see you at 3000 next week |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wowzzz!!!! Okay Everybody--GROUP HUG!!! (Janet Marie...ouch...I said GROUP, NOT GROPE!!!) loving you all right back!!! Okay, now, party at my place!!! Bring on the dancing boys!!!! Much Gratitude to Passions Poets! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
WOW, Congrat's on this Serenity. YOu must feel all warm and fuzzy inside. What a tribute to your fellow poets and friends. Keep on writing.  Jenn E |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity, Congrads on the 2000 th post. Wonderful poem. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet serenity, what a treasure without measure is this song just begun Wonderful poem...I was so pleased to see my name in this lovely poem...thank you..and congratulations! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Congrats on your 2000, and so well penned for the occasion.............. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
All the best for 2000 serenity I'm honoured to be included in your poem Glad to have brought you smiles ... you've certainly warmed our pages Fill your ink well and get busy You're a keeper Rex |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bonjour mon cherie....oh you did this one up in fine style...very clever how you put it together....you have my best wishes sent to your passionate Louisiana heart...congrats on reaching the 2000th I may have missed that one but sooner or later I will find it.... I'll be home for couchon de lait.....he he. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice for #2000! Congratulations. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And I in turn bow to thee m'lady; For as with all in life, there is balance. T'was not thee alone who fell enchanted. I salute thee lady, for thy perserverance (You know, putting up with me!  ) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there gurlie!!! This is so totally sweet. And a giant Congrats on the 2000. Yep!!! Loving all you do here. Mmhhm. Be well you. *Peace. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey girl! Great poem!! And a BIG congrats on your 2000! I'm touched, I really am! (thank you) You'll have to find a frame for this one girl! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! This flows perfect,and sounds like a song. Very sweet. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just wonderful serenity. . . you know that I wouldn't have missed this party for the world!! congratulations to you my friend. . . I join my fellow lords and ladies in saluting thee. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and what fun it has been! Thank you, all of your kind replies have moved me greatly. I'd never shown anybody what I'd written before, and you all made it easy with your warm support and encouragement. I'd like to especially thank Rich, (spiked) for directing me here at a time in my life when depression was overwhelming me--I'm so much better for the joy of Passions company. Thanks to all once again. |
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