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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-05 05:41 AM

I have stopped my brooding
over what I know must be true.
The answers that we keep including
are the hearts of me and you.
So here I shall be patient
as the wind takes it's toll.
On the soul of my enrapture
that you know full well.
Of how love has come to me
and it's meaning all so clear.
The way that you come to see
my eyes hold you dear.
So this is true love
of the kind others have lost.
I keep it close to me
and the spirit of it's cost.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-08-05 05:47 AM

MAN all I can say is beautiful....she is one lucky lady....

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-08-05 06:34 AM

Great work Michael. Beautifully presented.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-05 03:30 PM

So here I shall be patient
as the wind takes it's toll.
On the soul of my enrapture
that you know full well.
Of how love has come to me
and it's meaning all so clear.
The way that you come to see
my eyes hold you dear.
So this is true love
of the kind others have lost.
I keep it close to me
and the spirit of it's cost.
====================

and to quote you ...
"I could kiss you for this one"
man, this is just so sweetly perfect...
so much said with so few perfectly chosen lines...
loved this ones determination and acceptance
later gator
jm

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-08-05 04:59 PM

Great sentiment and written well.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-06 02:38 AM

Mark Bohannan said it best, a lucky lady she is. Lucky to have someone as beautiful, passionate, giving, loving, sincere, and selfless as you. May the winds of change blow on you both one day to a place ment to be.

As Always
Jenn E

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-08-08 12:27 PM

very passionate and well written awesome piece.

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