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Those Eyes
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Those Eyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Those eyes I'm in Love with Lena and I hope my feelings never go away. Every part of me reaches out to her as I admire her more each day. I suppose when you care for a woman you should know the reasons why. Let me begin with this reason than those lovely luscious eyes. For in her eyes she holds the key to all the love that grows in me. Thru her eyes the world she sees. By her eyes she judges me. And if she likes the man she sees perhaps her heart will come to me and I would thank those precious eyes for showing me how beautiful her heart can be. Jameslee@August06,2000 ThingsIadmire |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
How lovely! and heartfelt... wonderful, James regards, sudhir |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Beautiful writting. A very nice poem here. Beth~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is wonderful.  -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In her eyes you see the lover you are In her eyes the man you want to be In her eyes the dream of tommorrow Beautiful James never say never |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jmlee, What a wonderful poem I really enjoyed it.. it flowed beautifully rosepetals |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James this is lovely and I hope she gets to see it.....now tell me...who is Lena...I thought it was someone else or did I get lost in the maze of fantasy again.LOL Beautiful and tender. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi James, I am very glad that I stopped by to read this one that you have written. Very well done!!!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, I am away all this week in Quebec with very limited Internet capabilities. But you know as soon as I saw a poem by you, I couldn`t resist. As always you say the most beautiful and heartwarming things!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, Beth, Sea, Paula, rosepetal, Mark, Bill, and Marina for the lovely comments. Paula yes, yes, yes, exactly...you understand my feelings for her perfectly. Mark when I want a kiss I think of Lena..when I want to feel Love I look into Lena's eyes...she is the most beautiful women in Honolulu...and it is true that she wants me to wait and to go slow and I am trying to honor her desire. We had lunch early this afternoon at a Korean Restaurant and shared some special time together... I read her my original copy of this poem sitting across the table from her. I told her the poem was about her eyes. She gave me a beautiful smile. I was watching her closely when I read the part "those lovely luscious eyes". Those words touched her the most thruout the poem..she was really happy with it. When I saw the expressions on her face while I read this poem to her I went Wow.. We enjoyed the silver good luck fish in the entrance of the restaurant...she said I was her good luck...I told her she was my good luck.. A few soft kisses and Lena went shopping and I went to work..I work in the afternoon and evening.. Marina all I can say is hope you are having a wonderful time in Quebec...wish I was there also enjoying the sights...thank you for thinking about me and for your lovely warm comments....James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautifully romantic James...how could she not have loved it |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful poem for your Lena. Enjoyed this very much, James. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
James* Beautiful words of love from a beautiful heart....such sentiments of love and to share them with us in an honor, you've shared her beauty with us in the love that you wrote this with....it shines through in ever line~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, that you care for Lena deeply is evident in not only your poem, but the rest of your sharing here about her. She must be very special, to have captured your heart so intensely. Lovely writing, my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Hoot Owl, Eloise, butterfly, and Claire for your lovely responses. Claire she is very special and she has captured my heart now if I could only capture her heart...patience...one step at a time..one day at a time...if she likes what she sees she will come to me...if not..than I have tried...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have struck a chord with me on this one Lena was my mother's name and she had the most beautiful blue eyes. Your poem is so beautiful and I'm sure it will be treasured for always Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liz so glad you liked this poem about this lovely woman named Lena. I'm still looking into her eyes...and I love the time that I spend with her...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I LIKED THIS VERY MUCH!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Vandana I appreciate your nice comments..James |
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