Open Poetry #9 |
Summers Seas |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Summers Seas To what's blue and so full of life to me Is the endless waters of summers seas Not a moment to rest while the water moves Just brings truth to all I've ever known from you... Blue is the way to my baby and sea Like it's waves I wish she'd come back to me Let me hold what God intended to be mine And, let us hold each other until the end of time... Just like my heart I feel the water rushing away And, I see her and the waves drifting further each day I found the summers seas of tears where it really lies And, stare at the common wonder before these eyes... I can never get used to what never stays And, so I die a little more each new day And, forgive me for the tears and the summers seas Cause blue is still calling even stronger for me... I always thought if I held on tight we couldn't be free Where life expects a mother and her baby to be So, I had to let her go just to find her again Where blue then begins and the waters don't end... Summers seas of tears for what remains Tomorrow and forever I walk alone the same So, I open my eyes to find it's so hard to breathe And, living without her in life there's just no me... Saun Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ This is sheer melancholic beauty .... 'So, I had to let her go just to find her again Where blue then begins and the waters don't end...' Such wistful longing. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey---where have you been...Writing this awesome piece no doubt. Very beautiful and Marge said it so well so I echo her sentiments. Stay around some girl....we miss having you around |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow. This had such strong emotion when I read it, it's very good. |
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