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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Wander where the thoughts are sent clouds of black now silver tint Portents of doom dissipate dreams of magic resonate Hero arrives, magnificent loved attained to cease lament Forever they live happily but just within the reverie This is a repost from Dark Passions, but it went off the page so fast, almost no one saw it. I would truly appreciate feedback, as this simplistic style is different from my usual. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is wonderful... yes, it's simple, but oftentimes, less is more... it is succinct, vivid, emotionally charged, and dynamic... i enjoyed this very much and will look for more of your work. if this isn't your usual style, i'll be interested in reading the more complicated pieces, too. nice to meet you and thank you for all of your kind words this evening. *smile* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i was just thinkin as i read it how simplistic yuh but it packs a smack of punch a breath of fresh air in a small place..wonderfully done now as to that punch it packed...got any ice??? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is perfect..less is more when the words are well chosen and expressed.. you should try senyru, tanka or haiku stle poems...I bet you would be great at them based on the impact of this ... nice to have you in open posting take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Simply lovely and thought-provoking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I found this |
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