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kat
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0 posted 2000-08-06 08:24 PM


Stolen Moments

Hiding between shadows
Of past lives unfulfilled
Surrendering to pleasures
Love and passions thrill

Exhilarating stolen moments
Awakening every part of the soul
Melting with the touch of a lover
Passions secrets untold

Borrowed time to feel
Hearts racing in midst of one another
Reeling in the ecstasy of loves connection
Total submission to a lover

Effortlessly the soul opens up
The heart has found its place
Yearning eyes do gaze
Each other fingertips do gently trace

Words of love exchanged
Sometimes heard but always felt
Embracing every second with pure passion
In secrecy bodies melt

Tantalizing all the senses
Of body soul and mind
Blissfully trapping the moment
For later memories to find


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-08-06 08:39 PM


Beautiful Kat!  Tender and romantic sentiments to allow passionate memories to be re-lived again and again ... just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

kat
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2 posted 2000-08-06 09:14 PM


Kit:  Passionate memories do get relived over and over everytime we remember them. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!  

kat

MysticalNights
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3 posted 2000-08-07 04:48 AM


Great work kat!  Very beautiful read..
kat
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4 posted 2000-08-08 02:18 AM


MysticalNights:  I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for responding!  

kat

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insect
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5 posted 2000-08-09 12:18 PM


"Words of love exchanged
Sometimes heard but always felt
Embracing every second with pure passion
In secrecy bodies melt
"


Missed you kat!
Mmmmmmmmm!


kat
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6 posted 2000-09-03 08:02 PM


Insect: Sorry for responding to your post so late but I just saw it. Everytime I would check my poems to see if there were any replies to them..some of the poems wouldn't show up that's why I missed this one. Thanks for posting.  

kat

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2000-09-03 08:14 PM


Very sweet indeed!!!  We make our own memories so might as well make them good ones.  Great write.
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8 posted 2000-09-03 09:59 PM


Kat~
You're right on the money with this one !
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


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kat
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9 posted 2000-09-04 12:02 PM


Mark:  Yes we do and the more we try to make them good one's the more happier we'll be when we look back at them. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

Marge: Thanks! I'm glad you think I am and better yet, I'm even happier that you enjoyed the read..  


kat

brian madden
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10 posted 2000-09-04 02:27 PM


Borrowed time to feel
Hearts racing in midst of one another
Reeling in the ecstasy of loves connection
Total submission to a lover

sigh this one left me breathless just able to sigh softly. tender and beautiful poem.

Sit down and bargain
"Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi


kat
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11 posted 2000-09-07 04:31 PM


Brian: I'm glad it left you breathless and that you found it beautiful. It leaves me breathless whenever I remember moments like that. Thanks!  

kat

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