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JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-09-07 01:17 PM


sometimes
do I get to you
when i'm talking too loud..?
and all the things you never
liked about me...
seems to be the same things
he now sees in me...
i used to live
to please you
used to be...
what you wanted me to be..

and sometimes
do i irritate you
didn't mean to
didn't know i couldn't
"go there"
with your friends...
can't take a joke
when the jokes on you
are you looking for a payback?
and every man knows just how you feel
alot of your "friends"
were just better friends with me...

not looking for one night stands
though that might be what you think
baby i haven't forgot
all the good times we had
but i got what i put in
i was walking outside
the line
and only God has the reason
only God knows the ryhme
i was just buying my time

and sometimes
did i embarrass you
sorry i didn't know i
was having too much fun
and did you find it hard
to talk to me...?
or believe in my promises?
could you have changed me?
you think?
from day one you tried...
from day one
i cried....



Julie :)



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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-09-07 02:48 PM


And here is Julie, telling off another loser!! I love it, I need some lessons here.  
catalinamoon

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-09-07 04:51 PM


Thank you Cat....Yes too many losers..and they all go out to all of them!!! LOL....thanks for reading and replying...bye 4 now....

Julie :)



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-07 04:54 PM


WHO IS A LOSER???????/......oh...excuse me!  I thought you were talking about me.lol..Julie-way to go girl.  Loved this one and just keep discarding them until you find the one that knows how to have fun and enjoy life honestly as you do.
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