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Picture Pose |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“PICTURE POSE” Hello pretty lady, That I see in that photo. Is that fairy dust in your hair, Or might it be the falling snow. Then perhaps I was mistaken, And it wasn’t either one of those. But it was just the sparkling light, Radiating from you, in elegant repose. It’s a gracious smile that you show, Accented by those sensuous ruby red lips. If I could just reach out and touch them, You would feel my soft gentle fingertips. Your long dark hair flows down your back, And soft blue eyes, set in that beautiful face. All of the above makes for a charming pose, For someone that shows so very much grace. I looked up into the heavens, Not knowing what I might see. I searched and searched all over, Waiting for a sign that could be. Then I saw a star fall out of the sky, And I followed it, as it came down. “Where was it going?” I asked, As I watched it hit the ground. And then all of a sudden it came to me, When I looked again at that picture pose. You’re so much prettier than that streaking star, Because you’re more attractive, than a flowering red rose. So, now I sit here and I daydream, About how pretty you really are. And just maybe, that one of these days, I’ll come by and visit, if you let me come that far. Bill Charles |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, Awwww... soooo sweet Bill  "Then perhaps I was mistaken, And it wasn’t either one of those. But it was just the sparkling light, Radiating from you, in elegant repose..." This was my favorite verse I love your writings as usual!rosepetals25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh rosepetals, thank you for the kind words, you are sweet. Glad you liked the verse, and thanks for coming by. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, this is such an engaging poem...to hold the object of your affection with such sweet regard. Lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great images of perception Bill....I like how you tie them all into a picture of distant romance...good stuff my man keep em coming. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Meadowmuse, Thank you so much for reading and understanding what this poem is really saying. Claire, you are very perceptive, yes you are. And thank you for your kind words. Hi ethome, Wow, you also are so very perceptive. Thank you ethome, for coming by, and for your sweet words. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill.... Now I know for certain that you are possessed of a sensual, romantic muse, and I do hope the partnership is an everlasting one!! This is so very touching, and written with such feeling.... I cannot tell you how it warms the heart....so beautiful!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ 'It sounds like, sounds like, sounds like love to me.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny... Thank you Sunny, very much for your generous words. I did write this to a photo, and I am glad that you liked it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh Marge...Now you have me blushing, goodness. |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Heart touching and beautiful... I love it!! Wonderful writing!!  ~Kelly  You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kellsue, I would like to thank you for coming by for a read. And thank you also for the kind comments, it's very appreciated. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill I just wrote a reply, think I lost it. Anyway, nicely done with a beautiful story. The words seem to flow and weave their magic. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill Your words seem to flow like magic and tell a loving, beautiful story. Your poems are so enjoyable and each one tells a different story. You have a mystical pen. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Bill! Bill! My hair isn't dark, it's red as you can see - it doesn't flow down my back or reach down to my knees. My eyes are not cornflower blue but plain old common brown, so I must deduce I'm not the one creating words so profound! So I'll just sulk - what the hell in this area I do excel! Lovely poem, just teasing ya! Corinne |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning "dd", Nice to see you once again, and I thank you for your kind comments. Mystical huh, h'mmmm. Good morning Corinne, Well I don't know what to say, except that you have given me some inspiration to ponder when I begin a new writing. Thank you for stopping, and thank you for your kind words. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha..ha..made me happy reading this...I love romantic poetry...especially sincerely and skillfully written poetry...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Bill, another one of your beautiful poems... regards, sudhir |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Another great poem, I also liked your one about the mermaid "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
You have a definite way of capturing the essence of love and longing. I enjoy the admiration and the beautiful images in your writing. I hope it isn't kept to yourself! Always a pleasure... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am not the gentle lady in the picture that you drew but should you write those words to me then you would have a clue as to how to speak and such and ultimately know you've touched a heart that thought indeed to be hidden now love comes softly in words you've written. Yea, Bill! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, Hi James, thank you for your sincere comments, and I am pleased that this piece could make you happy. Hi Sudhir Iyer, Once again I thank you for stopping by to read one that I have written. Hi Tess, Thank you for coming by my place, and also for the gracious comments about this writing. Hello Trew, And a gracious thank you for coming by, and for your comments about this little piece that I have done. I am glad that you have enjoyed reading it, and I write so that I can share and that others can enjoy. Oh Sunshine...How to thank you for your exquisite poem that you have written. I am very touched by it, and also pleased that I have touched a heart as soft as yours might be. Thank you ever so much Sunshine, and may your day be full of romance. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Just beautiful Bill! Loved it! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Awwwwwwwwwww, Bill, this was so tender and sweet. Enjoyed it alot... Jenn E |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tennessee Angel, Thank you Angel, and also for your kind comments. I just love your little saying at the bottom. Hi Jenn E, Thank you so much for coming by, and for the kind comments. I appreciate it very much. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Evening,...what a truly sweet and gentle read. I'm really liking the end bit, how in a way it's sort of like a question. So cute. Be well BC. *Peace. *BTW,...thanks for stopping by.  . |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi SpitFire, And a very good evening to you. Thank you for coming by my place and for your kind comments. And your welcome, to your statement. I will be by your place again. |
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