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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i don't knwo waht to call this...any suggestions? try to hide what i feel, what they see is no real. all my thoughs keep me away yet the pain makes life stay. cant you see my pain? you dont feel the strain all emotions drain i'm no longer sane. tears hit the ground like trees falling down fear builds all around i wont be found. seeing such destruction, i cannot function. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
great work,and it is hard to call it somethin but maybe call it....The Way I Feel or somethin like that? i dont know but its a great poem keep it up  |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well thanx for the suggestion but i think i'll just keep it as untitled... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
I read your poem, and at times in my life I can relate. How 'bout calling it "My Pain" |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
can't call it that cuz i already have one called...'the pain' too confusing for my files Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Maybe i'm out in left field here...but this sounds like a suicide note....(very well written of course).. or someone very seriously contemplating suicide....I hope very much that i am wrong...but i knew a young girl that killed herself when she was 14..so it's kinda hard for me to keep my opinions on the matter to myself...email me if you ever need to talk..Majestic@ev1.net "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Niko, Great job expressing your feelings. If you continue writing about your feelings it will help. "Therapy", "Destruction","Fear", "Talking out loud", some titles that come to mind. Bless you Niko and please take the above poster (Majestic) up on his offer if in fact these thoughts have occured to you. You are among friends. marcy |
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