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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Each day She does not guide nor does she hide But stays and whispers at my side. Enchanting me like morning's dew With new born shadows passing thru. Like odors, at the break of dawn Scenting scents of those unborn. Gliding all upon the mist. Touching every turn and twist. Delights me with her downy gay Like bobbing butterflies at play. Chitchats with the birds that sing Their wakefulness in early spring. She steeps her humor like a tea And serve it to me guiltlessly. With plumb uniqueness of a child And wisdom of the undefiled. She banquets me. A shameless spread. Until enchantment fills my sled She fills my heart and head with deeds Beyond contentment of my needs. In constant play of Santa Claus And I a child, in wild applause. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"She steeps her humor like a tea And serve it to me guiltlessly." Lots of delightful lines in this, Seymour, but I liked this one in particular. Very pretty ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Claire, Before I go to sleep I just want to thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
She steeps her humor like a tea And serve it to me guiltlessly. With plumb uniqueness of a child And wisdom of the undefiled. .. .. In constant play of Santa Claus And I, a child, in wild applause. ...... CLAP! CLAP! CLAP! CLAP! Great work, Seymour... regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Seymour... The last two lines were my favorite of all... but the entire poem was wonderful!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I absolutely love this one. Some of your lines are very original. You have a wonderful muse. Tell us when she says, "Seymour, don't want to chit-chat this morning."  marcy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so delightful and filled with wonderful phrases. I am truly in awe of your work. This is absolutely superb I am clapping with Sudhir Liz |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
A very original work! I Enjoyed reading this so much I did like the"She steeps her humor like a tea And serve it to me guiltlessly." line best! "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you for the clap, clap. Sunny1, Thanks for the wonderful. Elizabeth, Very sweet, Love Sy Tessd, Beautiful comment. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Seymour, 1).thank you Meadowmuse 2).thank you Sudhir 3).thank you Sunny 4).  5).thank you Elizabeth 6).thank you Tess 7).appreciates all above I have drawn a little puzzle, do you see anything wrong with the above puzzle picture? Boo-hooo! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
enchanting write...unique |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alli Cram, Not a hard puzzle and I ask you to forgive me I'll just have to thank you twice. Paula Finn, Beautiful comment, thank you. |
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