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Lover'z Waltz
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Lover'z Waltz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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(to be read in a 1-2-3 cadence, or anyway you like!) What do you do... When it feels like your sweet love's all gone? What do you do... When you're dreading the night, but remembering a night that was never too long? What do you do... When you run out of nice things to say? What do you do... When you think you should go, but your poor heart keeps begging to stay? Do what's right... Do what ever you have to..to get you both safe through the night... Do what's right... Do whatever your heart says..you need to give love one more try... Do what's right... There is still time to dance to your song... All night long... So take two steps forward and never look back... Lover's waltz.. in the light of the dawn... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, This was very nice and I much enjoyed it Auguste |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Auguste... Hello, and thank you!!! What would romance be without a good waltz now and then? (Glad you enjoyed!!) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I agree, take a step forward , or two, and see where it leads you.  Catalinamoon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl...WOW..what a dance you created in my mind...now if my partner will just cooperate. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I love a good waltz!!! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed your poetry muchly. Nicely written. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Enjoyed the waltz, Sunny. Thanks. Good poem. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon.... Just close your eyes and let the music take you away..... Thank you very much! Paula... You must make sure your partner is not stepping on your toes, in more ways then one!! Always a pleasure, girl!! Jamie... I imagine that you would be a great waltz partner, just by how you write. Haiku and waltz are similar in form, both condensed but full of freedom. Mike... I thank you so much and am really glad you stopped by, and also for your reply.....means a lot! Eloise... Every day is a good day to waltz. It puts some grace back into the routine! Thank you, my friend. I have but one goal in life......It is: Not to have just one goal in Life!! ~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
always enjoys your poetry. keep writing and I'll keep reading it!!!!!! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice i must say, and thanks for the advice on the waltz  Salma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, One poem after the other you write and your tender heart shows how you feel. A talent that will not ever be lost, as long as you write like you do. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
vandana... Thank you and it's a deal!!!!!! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always take one step forward and two steps back and can't figure out why I never get anywhere!!  Love it, sunny... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Salooma... Thank you so much and the only trick to a waltz is that you both have to do the same step, otherwise you can end up with sore toes!!!!! Hi Bill... I probably won't stop writing until they pry empty pen out of my cold, stiff hands!!! Good to see you, and thank you..... I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Balladeer.... You can't waltz through life! You gotta Boogie!!!! Thank you for reading and glad you liked!! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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