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My Lil' Guy
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My Lil' Guy |
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topnotch707 Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 16vallejo, cali, usa |
He's so precious in my eyes he's the love of my life he's my lil' guy. He's been through so much at the age of three he's an angel in disguise sent to protect me. He's always there when I need him he keeps me on my toes he's a gift from heaven only God knows. He's the air that I breathe he gives me wings to fly I love him with my entire heart 'cuz he's my lil' guy. Dedicated to my son, Robert Morgan III< !signature--> [This message has been edited by topnotch707 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful display of love and your emotions..you know I have 3 sons all grown up now and it is so hard for me to write about my family, my mom or dad, my boys...I'm not sure why...I know that I feel lots of pain when I think about my relationship with my dad..I have written a few about my exwife...and mentioned my sons within these poems. I have writen close to a hundred for girlfriends, and casual friends, and close friends of mine. Wonder why it is so hard to write about my own. I admire your ability to write about your family...Take care...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem and a great, heartfelt tribute to your son. I bet he feels the same way about you. Nathan |
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del shei New Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 6North Carolina |
Sweet. Endearing. Obvious that you are a proud parent. There is nothing like the peace a child can bring to our lives. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was so cute. Even though my son is a grown young man this poem brought back some lovely memories. Thank-you  )-------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Awwwwwwwww, this was so tender and full of love. My son is 5 and he has been through so much in the last two years.....This poem was very touching. An angel they are, nothing I would not do. I respect your "proudness", if thats even a word. lol Take Care Jenn E |
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