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She Cries
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She Cries |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Forced to be something she is not, She smiles when she's sad, afraid to be caught. Can't let them see the tears within, For once they start they will not end. As she waits she slowly dies. Her tears are suppressed, but inside she cries. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing angel girl...let those tears flow...they will end and you will feel better...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Angel girl~ What a sad little piece Hope this isn't really how you are feeling, if so I hope it ends soon. Here's a smile  and a hug for youTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
It makes you wonder how many people you meet each day are smiling on the outside, but really crying on the inside. Good Job! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
jmlee- I hope it does end soon, but I often feel it never will. tracie- Unfortunately, this is how I feel and have felt for quite some time. Debbie- I too wonder who out there feels like I do. I feel so alone sometimes. |
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