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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
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within a whisper...

0 posted 2000-09-24 09:49 AM


Forced to be something she is not,
She smiles when she's sad, afraid to be caught.

Can't let them see the  tears within,
For once they start they will not end.

As she waits she slowly dies.
Her tears are suppressed, but inside she cries.

© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-24 08:32 PM


Nice writing angel girl...let those tears flow...they will end and you will feel better...James
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-09-25 01:56 AM


Angel girl~
What a sad little piece
Hope this isn't really how you are feeling, if so I hope it ends soon.
Here's a smile   and a hug for you
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
3 posted 2000-09-26 08:43 AM


It makes you wonder how many people you meet each day are smiling on the outside, but really crying on the inside.
Good Job!

angel girl
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within a whisper...
4 posted 2000-09-27 06:59 AM


jmlee- I hope it does end soon, but I often feel it never will.

tracie- Unfortunately, this is how I feel and have felt for quite some time.

Debbie- I too wonder who out there feels like I do. I feel so alone sometimes.

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