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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia

0 posted 2000-09-19 05:00 AM


Do you see what I see
A clearing is in sight
Slowly the darkness has lifted
Now I see the light
~~~
The light beams have struck a heart
Now it beats like never before
It's load is much lighter now
As darkness creeps out the door
~~~
I hope the light decides to stay
To keep this heart real warm
When darkness lived inside this heart
It slowly made it worn
~~~
So let the light shine in
Warm this tender heart once more
So forever will it shine brightly
Never again to be tattered and torn
~~~

For my friend Lone Wolf
I hope your life is always filled with happiness
and your heart always shining.
luv ya girl
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-19 05:13 AM


Rays of warmth upon horizon shine
Beams of caress touching your heart
Feast of smiles in which you will dine
As tomorrow brings you a fresh new start

Tender is the heart of wolf left alone
Prowling against luna's soft glow
Eyes of sparkle as she as often shown
The beauty of the wolf we all came to know

Proud am I to say this verse of care
For one so lovely as tomorrow will prove
One that is always so eager to share
With words of praise that always move


****Tracie****---wonderful write and your heart shines as well in this one......LW-tomorrow begins when you wake up in a smile so sending one to you so you don't have to live yesterday again.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-09-19 05:22 AM


Dear Mark
Your poem is just beautiful and one that LW will love...thanks  
Your a wonderful man and I thank you for taking the time to read and reply.
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-09-19 07:02 AM


Traci* Your heart is beautiful and I know
how much this must have touched LW...she's a
angel of a girl and deserves the sun to
shine on her...((hugs)) to you for this gem
of a dedication...so very beautiful!!

tracie66
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Australia
4 posted 2000-09-21 04:29 AM


Hello sweet butterflies
Thanks for you loving reply
I wrote this for her to keep her spirits high.

Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-09-22 10:26 PM


Tracie,

My dear friend, you have touched the depths of my heart with your beautiful poem.  I apologize for the delay in replying to this, but things have been very busy for me lately.  I have to say I love this so much that I am printing it and posting it above my desk to remind me of what dear friends I have in the world.  I appreciate your thoughts and wishes more than I could ever tell you.  I am lucky to have such a  wonderful friend as you!!  You are very sweet!!    

Love ya too,
Lone Wolf

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Mark . . . Thank you for the verses, they are lovely and appreciated.

BDC . . . I am very touched by this.  Thank you so much for the wishes my friend.    
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Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 09-22-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-09-22 10:48 PM


Tracie~
This is a lovely and thoughtful render
for a lovely lady !
I can see her determined smile as she reads
it each day above her desk.
What a nice gift from your heart for a friend.

*LoneWolf~
You KNOW we LOVE ya' ....  
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2000-09-25 01:53 AM


Dear LW  

I'm so glad you liked this and priviledged that you would print it for above your desk.
I wrote this to say what I was feeling for you at the time and how hard it must be...hope your world is happy and colourful for you at the moment and for all time.
Love Tracie  

Dear Marge
Thanks for your lovely reply and for taking the time to read it and comment as you always do...it's very much appreciated  
Our poetry is our gift to each other isn't it and it's how we express ourselves best.
Thanks Marge
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-09-25 05:37 AM


I enjoyed reading this...it is so easy to get bogged down in the pain and the sorrow of this world and I am so glad that you are shining that light...happiness is waiting for us when we are ready to embrace it...after each night comes the light...James
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
9 posted 2000-09-27 03:27 AM


James~
Thanks for your beautiful reply, you are so right.
Thanks for taking the time to read this, it's much appreciated.
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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