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Tattered & Torn for Lone Wolf
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Tattered & Torn for Lone Wolf |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Do you see what I see A clearing is in sight Slowly the darkness has lifted Now I see the light ~~~ The light beams have struck a heart Now it beats like never before It's load is much lighter now As darkness creeps out the door ~~~ I hope the light decides to stay To keep this heart real warm When darkness lived inside this heart It slowly made it worn ~~~ So let the light shine in Warm this tender heart once more So forever will it shine brightly Never again to be tattered and torn ~~~ For my friend Lone Wolf I hope your life is always filled with happiness and your heart always shining. luv ya girl Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Rays of warmth upon horizon shine Beams of caress touching your heart Feast of smiles in which you will dine As tomorrow brings you a fresh new start Tender is the heart of wolf left alone Prowling against luna's soft glow Eyes of sparkle as she as often shown The beauty of the wolf we all came to know Proud am I to say this verse of care For one so lovely as tomorrow will prove One that is always so eager to share With words of praise that always move ****Tracie****---wonderful write and your heart shines as well in this one......LW-tomorrow begins when you wake up in a smile so sending one to you so you don't have to live yesterday again.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Mark Your poem is just beautiful and one that LW will love...thanks Your a wonderful man and I thank you for taking the time to read and reply. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Traci* Your heart is beautiful and I know how much this must have touched LW...she's a angel of a girl and deserves the sun to shine on her...((hugs)) to you for this gem of a dedication...so very beautiful!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello sweet butterflies Thanks for you loving reply I wrote this for her to keep her spirits high. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, My dear friend, you have touched the depths of my heart with your beautiful poem. I apologize for the delay in replying to this, but things have been very busy for me lately. I have to say I love this so much that I am printing it and posting it above my desk to remind me of what dear friends I have in the world. I appreciate your thoughts and wishes more than I could ever tell you. I am lucky to have such a wonderful friend as you!! You are very sweet!! Love ya too, Lone Wolf --------------------------------------------- Mark . . . Thank you for the verses, they are lovely and appreciated. BDC . . . I am very touched by this. Thank you so much for the wishes my friend. < !signature-->Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is a lovely and thoughtful render for a lovely lady ! I can see her determined smile as she reads it each day above her desk. What a nice gift from your heart for a friend. *LoneWolf~ You KNOW we LOVE ya' .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear LW I'm so glad you liked this and priviledged that you would print it for above your desk. I wrote this to say what I was feeling for you at the time and how hard it must be...hope your world is happy and colourful for you at the moment and for all time. Love Tracie Dear Marge Thanks for your lovely reply and for taking the time to read it and comment as you always do...it's very much appreciated Our poetry is our gift to each other isn't it and it's how we express ourselves best. Thanks Marge Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this...it is so easy to get bogged down in the pain and the sorrow of this world and I am so glad that you are shining that light...happiness is waiting for us when we are ready to embrace it...after each night comes the light...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ Thanks for your beautiful reply, you are so right. Thanks for taking the time to read this, it's much appreciated. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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