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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-09-22 05:57 PM


I Thank You


For all the numerous times
Your gentle hands have
Lifted my soul

I thank you

For all the numerous times
You have stood by me
With kind words

I thank you

For all the numerous times
You’ve made me smile
With your humor

I thank you

For all the numerous times
You’ve let me cry into
Your gentle arms

I thank you

For all the numerous times
You’ve been my friend
With your love

I thank you

For all the numerous times
You’ve been you and
For not changing

I thank you

From the bottom of my
Very grateful and
Loving heart

I thank you.



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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-09-22 06:17 PM


I believe that one should never miss a
chance to tell someone thank you or that
they are loved...this is a perfect display
of that...How very beautiful!!! Great work~

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-09-22 06:21 PM


Butterflies - Thank you   I agree with you a hundrend percent.  I have already sent this out to a few close friends   I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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3 posted 2000-09-22 06:58 PM



~Rosepetals~

When someone as caring and emotional such as yourself is grateful, a beautiful poem is the result.  This is your best, in reading it I can just feel the love and tenderness.  This is how I feel towards my Mom.  If you wouldn't mind, I'd like to print this out and show her?! And THANKYOU for writing this poem!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



rosepetals25
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4 posted 2000-09-22 07:38 PM


Melissa - Awww.. thank you for the nice things you say. I would feel honored that you would like to share the poem with your mom .  
juliet_2u
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5 posted 2000-09-22 08:00 PM


Awww Rosepetals what a beautiful tender heart I see here. My favorite kind. A wonderful read my friend.
Juls

rosepetals25
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6 posted 2000-09-22 09:14 PM


Juliet - Thank you   I owe alot to a certain friend at the moment, which was the inspiration for this poem I'm happy you liked it.
Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2000-09-22 09:20 PM


For all the numerous times
you have made such sweet replies
I thank you

For all the numerous times
you have shared you heart
I thank you.

Lovely write my friend.

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8 posted 2000-09-22 09:26 PM


This is so nice!! I agree that thanking someone for the little things they do is so important and it's amazing how many times we don't do it. Thanks for the reminder....
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9 posted 2000-09-22 09:38 PM


Mark - Your compliment have made me blush... again..lol   Thank you so much for you sweet words.. they mean so much.

Ball - We should thank those people who do so much for us without even knowing. Unfortunately as you said.. things often slip be unnoticed. Thank you for stopping in  

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