Open Poetry #9 |
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The Wedding Vow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
The Wedding Vow Tonight’s the night of promises A vow of love will chime Through every heart that hears the voice Of one who once was mine Her words will echo in the winds And through the ages pass Her sons will see them on her face Through future’s looking glass A promise made of love that’s true Will last the test of time And I will etch this wedding vow In fringes of my mind And bless the cherished words she sings This girl who once was mine |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Very nice poem, and a touching tribute to your daughter(I hope Im right in that assumption). Thanks for the read. Keith |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Is this about Christina? If it is, I'm sure she will treasure it forever. Beautiful work as always, Elizabeth. Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ May the love of Unity's Light shine on this night. Proud Father and Mother joining in the wedding of Christina. Best wishes to her and the lucky man. God be with you all in this celebration. I'll be there in spirit, my friend. Love to you all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Congratulations in both areas for a wonderful poem and I'm sure a wonderful wedding. Love Sy |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Elizabeth, What a lovely poem for your daughter ![]() rp25 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful dedication to your daughter. I am sure that she and her husband will cherish this for always ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--A special poem for a special time...a treasure for them as they will continue to be for you. Hugs! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
May God bless their union - and I can tell you with some certainty - mothers who have been best friends to their daughters growing up - never lose them ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've gained a son, and I hope for their sake, this was a gift to them, as they will cherish it forever... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is something they will cherish forever! Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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