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Open Poetry #9

I Need You

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2000-09-22 01:43 PM

A little different approach for the challenge "If I were to need you" Just felt this is the way I would "need" someone....

Sometimes when
No other words
Need to be spoken

When I fall short
Of who I am
Suppose to be

When life is on
My shoulders

And the nights
Seem to be
Long

When I feel
I cannot do
Anything right

And I fumble
My words

I want you
To know

That

I Need You

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-22 01:49 PM

And what a lovely twist it is also. Wonderfully penned.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2000-09-22 04:11 PM

Hi Greeneyes,
Well done, and a very nice way to say "I need you".

Bill

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

3 posted 2000-09-22 04:14 PM

This was a great twist. I like the format as well as the message.

Jenn E

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

4 posted 2000-09-22 04:20 PM

Ms Ojos Verdi -
You have not lost your touch - and now you added a new dimension - this is exceptional

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2002-03-12 02:44 PM

Lauren,
Did I ever tell you that I like being needed! Awesome write.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2002-07-08 05:47 PM

ahh..yes..and we must remember to need them when things are going well also. Searching through the archives. Miss you 'round here, Lady.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-01-13 02:55 AM

*smile* love this

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