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Cheryl Flemming
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0 posted 2000-09-17 12:15 PM



As I sit here next to the rippling brook
Feeling the water rushing across my foot
Letting my mind drift off into space
I feel your gentle hand touching my face

We sit together in a warm embrace
Letting go of the everyday rat race
Listening to the sounds of natures love
We look up to see a dove

We here the music of the woods
The birds are singing their mating call
The squirrels getting ready for the long winter haul
As we look across the rippling brook
We see a dear and take a second look

Oh if only we could
Stay in this place and time
And never let material things clutter our mind
To preserve and protect
And never neglect
Mother nature at her best.


© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Flemming - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2000-09-17 12:29 PM


It's funny, I was just talking about the same thing today:
"if only we could
stay in this place and time
and never let material things clutter our mind"
It saddens me to see most people not taking time to stare in awe at the most beautiful things in this world, for instance, the amazing sunset we had today, or just the simple beauty of the rain (especially enjoyable if shared with a loved one).
Great poem!!

Cuddlez
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2 posted 2000-09-17 01:56 AM


I never understand why people have to clutter nature up either... Some people just dont appreciate what they have.
Snowpants- I love running in the rain or rollerblading in it. SO much fun .

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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3 posted 2000-09-17 02:06 AM


Cuddlez~
To view nature undisturbed is serenity at it's finest hour.
A pretty picture indeed.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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snowpants
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4 posted 2000-09-17 02:26 AM


Cuddlez - Walking in the rain is definitely the best!!
(Sorry to talk on your page, Cheryl)  

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-09-17 06:34 AM


Oh how I enjoyed reading this tender poem...James
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-09-17 08:15 AM


Cheryl,
Enjoyed the read.

Beth
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7 posted 2000-09-17 08:20 AM


~Cheryl..
         This was a lovely read. I enjoyed this well written piece!~


~Cherie~

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8 posted 2000-09-17 09:56 AM


Cheryl, this is just what I needed today. Thank you.  
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9 posted 2000-09-17 11:19 AM


Lovely memories to hold on to.  I absolutely adore nature and all she gives us and you have penned such beauty with your words.  Lovely and serene.  Thank you for that.
Cheryl Flemming
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10 posted 2000-09-17 11:58 PM


Thank you so much everyone.I am a nature lover also and have found peace of mind so many times just sitting next to a brook or just under a big oak tree listening to the sounds of the earth.I find so much pleasure in life in the things that don't cost a thing but my time.  And is no farther than my front door.But I also find pleasure coming here and reading all these beautifully written poems.
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11 posted 2002-01-18 03:52 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of nature always shines in your gorgeous lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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12 posted 2003-01-13 02:55 AM


if only we could stay...yeah...sigh
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