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I Don't Have to Tell You
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I Don't Have to Tell You |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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When I think of you, The world is a better place I don't have to tell you You can see it on my face When I think of you The sun always shines I don't have to tell you You can see it in this rhyme When I think of you The day is always bright I don't have to tell you You can see it in my light When I think of you The soul of me is warm I don't have to tell you You can see it in this form When I think of you And of the love you give I don't have to tell you But I will as long as I live -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Another beauty, Sven. A warm and tender poem, that relaxes the soul. Keep the romance alive! Trev. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, What a wonderful way for me to start my poetry reading off, with one of your very beautiful poems full of what love should feel like, thank you so much for your loving soul and that you are so willing to share. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Sven wow lovely sentiment but I hope you still say the words to her can't hurt!...... nona |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Lovely,my friend,just lovely!!!!!!!  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I don't have to tell you but I will you perfected yet another dreamy poem so now that's to much said. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, Awwww Sven.. you have the sweetest heart And it shines once again in this poem.rp25 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 when words can't say enough... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I am really starting to LOVE opening up anything you write...this is another example why. Beautiful, sweet poem here. Jenn E |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, Sven, "I don't have to tell you" how much I admire you and stand in awe of your romantic poetry because you already know, but, I will anyways - this is beautiful Mr. Romance  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven this is truely lovely. Your heart speaks so loud and shines so bright. How does one live without this kind of poetry? I would never want to find out. Thank you for blessing us with it. Never stop my dear friend. Juls |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Sven! This, my friend, is one of your best, imo. So full of life, it speaks... and it says, what a loving heart you have. Very good writing. Marcy |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
You don't HAVE to tell her, but it's always nice to hear. She'll love you even more for it. |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Your are very tenderhearted.This is very beautiful. |
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T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
Cool sven. You da man!! T. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven... When I think of this piece written with such grace I don't have to tell you It puts a smile upon my face Well done Sir, I do love it! ~Sheri |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to all of you. . . Trev, thank you. . . it's always been my mission in life. . . Cerenity, thank you for your kind words and warm heart. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . Nona, thank you. . . and I always do. . . vandana, thank you my friend. . . Rosebud, thank you, you've said just enough. . . rp25, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, sometimes, the light is all I need. . . thank you my friend. . . JennE, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoy. . . Melissa my friend, you don't have to tell me. . . but I'm glad that you do. . . thank you. . . Juls, thank you. . . I don't know how to live without this. . . I hope I never have to find out. . . thanks again my friend. . . Marcy, I am so glad that you think this is one of my best. . . that means a lot to me. . .thank you. . . Tara, I know that I don't HAVE to. . . but you know that I will anyway. . . Cheryl, thank you so much. . . T, I learned from the best!! LOL Thank you. . . Irie, thank you my friend. . . it's so nice to have you back. . . you've been gone too long. . . I am glad that you liked this --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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