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jlocke
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CC,TX

0 posted 2000-09-21 01:50 PM


Women

Women are just plain crazy
Right from the very start
Hell, they pluck petals from daisies
To judge if love is in a mans heart

They begin life with a handicap
As all of us men know
Into this world they came
Not a one having a soul

Never can they be trusted
For they only weave lies
Unless we want our lip busted
We can’t even mention their thighs

They say that they are ugly
They say that they are fat
Then they ask our opinion
A smart man won’t answer that

Because to them we’re always wrong
Whether we say one thing or the other
Then they just ***** us out
And complain to their mothers

Mother-in-laws are really bad
You see they are women, too
Just the fact you married their daughter
Justifies a life long hate for you

They say that all men are pigs
And they call us big fat slobs
Then they stick their noses in the air
And show they’re nothing but snobs

All they do is nag at us
They have nothing better to say
They complain when we work
They complain when we play

They complain when we drink beer
They complain when we fart
The truth behind both of those is
It’s their cooking that made us start

They complain about the toilet seat
How lazy can they be?
If they don’t look before they sit
They’re just showing their stupidity

They gossip about stupid crap
Then they gossip some more
Truly they are women
Listen to them bore

Now that I’ve said what I had to say
And all this dribble is through
I want you to know this doesn’t apply to all
But if you’re a woman it probably applies to you

jlocke

© Copyright 2000 Jeremy Locke Culberth - All Rights Reserved
Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
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disbelief
1 posted 2000-09-21 01:54 PM


How truely funny. I laughed the whole way through.  

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
2 posted 2000-09-21 03:48 PM


Thank you,
  I knew that a fellow man would appreciate the simple truths I laid out here.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-09-21 03:49 PM


Oh yes Jlock I must admit they are all this for sure...
and still their beauty and softness have us begging for more and more...James

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2000-09-21 03:54 PM


Its like this, try living without us!

Dee
very funny, by the way

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2000-09-21 03:58 PM


LMAO...well I dont quite know how to reply to you...I am most definitely a woman but I sure dont see myself in what you have written...heck I drink beer and watch(and UNDERSTAND) football...give me a brak ok? I LIKE men. HAHAHA
Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
6 posted 2000-09-21 04:01 PM


Written in pig latin, I take it???

Corinne

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
7 posted 2000-09-21 04:07 PM


jmlee12345---very true.

Dee---Then who would clean my house?

Paula Finn---It doesn't apply to all, at least not you.

Corinne---Yep, just so you could read it.

Love is the law, love under will.



2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
8 posted 2000-09-21 04:28 PM


Remember, Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus- Man's perception: Give a man a fish- he eats today. Teach him to fish and he sits in a boat and drinks beer all day.
Woman's perception: Give a man a fish- he eats today. Teach him to fish and you get rid of him for the weekend.
Either way we win.
Melton

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
9 posted 2000-09-21 05:03 PM


I am sure this was written as a joke. Surely you don't feel this way about the women in your family!!!!!
jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
10 posted 2000-09-21 05:41 PM


of course it's just a joke

Love is the law, love under will.



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-09-22 04:55 PM


jlocke

Remember the toilet seat thing
whether it's up or down
well it's a competition
and the winner takes the crown
and you'll notice when we ****
that we never, never, miss
except when you've put the cover down
are you worried we'll fall in and drown
not like you guys who stand away
hoping to hit the bowl some way
leaving the droplets one or four
glistening on the toilet floor.  

Btw liked the poem, even though it was a bit harsh on us fairer sex.

Kethry



"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
12 posted 2000-09-22 04:59 PM


girls should just cook and clean
and wipe the boogers from me clean!!

thaz all nuttin more

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
13 posted 2000-09-22 05:17 PM


OMG!
I am dying laughing here..wonderful come-back!
Twas a deserved prod....


PS but not a word of it is true

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
14 posted 2000-09-22 05:47 PM


It's like I said in X Angel's poem on men.........WOMEN would be in complete control of men at ALL times if we just walked around NAKED.......we just chose not to. LOL..........Don't get me wrong I love men.........but let's face it 2 heads are NOT always better then one!!!! LOL

You could not live without us!!!!!!

Jenn E

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
15 posted 2000-09-23 02:31 PM


Sorry my reply is late but I had to go away for a couple of days.

Kethry -- Love your poem, just don't forget to clean the floor for us. Thanx

wayoutwalt -- Let me guess, you're not married.

X Angel -- Not a word.  Are you sure?

Jenn E -- You could control me like that any day!




Love is the law, love under will.



X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
16 posted 2000-09-23 03:55 PM


can I plead the fifth???????

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