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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-21 09:57 PM

When two share hearts of common bond
as deeply as wave's crash is loud,
smooth motion o'er life's obstacles~
together~ flows with hands held proud.

Never each new dawn brings balmy sun;
a storming churn in clouds o'erhead
attempts to strike its bitter drops;
unravel ropes to baring thread.

Clasp tight, grasp firm, with arms protect,
hold fast our warmth behind strong wall;
Put thunder's roar to quiet rest~
Make dry sky tears before they fall.

When two share hearts of common bond,
adoring oneness quells our fear.
When two share love the storm abates;
life's troubles tend to disappear.

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...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-21-2000).]

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-09-21 11:36 PM

This is wonderful...it has a feeling of security to it.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-09-21 11:43 PM

Yes, there is security when two share.
Thank you for the kind words, Poet deVine

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

3 posted 2000-09-21 11:44 PM

C.Degeste
I love reading this one. You seemed to capture the trials and tribulations that two may go through as they try to hold onto love. Storms will come often. Excellent write. Loved it.

Garfield

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2000-09-21 11:52 PM

To appreciate clear skies, we have to
face some rough weather.
Thank you, Garfield

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-09-22 12:09 PM

I can picture the contentment and sense of being safe from all harm just by reading this one. Very nice writing Chanson.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-09-22 12:18 PM

Lone Wolf - thank you... very much!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-09-22 01:46 AM

What a perfect tale of true life.....storms come to us everyday in so many ways and when you have the love of another to help you through it then it helps make the storm not look so bad afterall.

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-09-22 02:12 AM

Wow girl this is great. I loved the whole feel of it. Talk to ya soon.
Juls

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

9 posted 2000-09-22 08:14 AM

Mark, yes...very true. We weather storms much better with one beside us.
Your words and visits always mean alot. Thank you

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

10 posted 2000-09-22 08:50 AM

Thank you, Juls! Catch you soon

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

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