Open Poetry #9 |
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Destiny |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
A little shakespearean but I do love his poetry! How doth the days turn to nights? The sun riseth up and the sun goeth down, somewhere in between I think I found a cloud with a little rainbow stretching across the skies. How would the trees whisper out to the heavens as they flow into the air, and whisper: I love the birds that come and visit me and sing brand new songs each day. How doth the rivers flow in such a way that makes me in awe of their beauty that flows for an eternity. The colors of the rainbow each making us a promise of a new day once again how doth my heart sing for the brightness of the sun and the afterglow at night of the moon and stars that maketh me aspire to this day. Each day the mountains reach their destiny at their highest peak reaching to the stars and heaven seems to seek us to climb our mountains and reach our destiny so we will fly high and sing a new song just as it intended to be. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Rosebud.... This is just wonderful to read! I love to see the beauty of nature in words, and you did it brilliantly, topping it off with a great thought to start my day!! Thank you for this gem!! ![]() Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nothing better than the tender loving caresses of nature to heal our hearts and sing to our souls. Absolutely beautiful and going in my library...love nature...but verse is going in on it's own merit. ![]() |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much for the rose sunny1, and Mark thank you, I'm always inspired by the beauty of each new day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosebud, This poem is like you a budding rose. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Seymour, how doth I like your response, at least a million ways!! A budding rose I like that! Just wait until I bloom. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent poem. . . but sometimes, our destiny is not where we think that it is. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thank you oh most wise one! Sven-when will our destiny we know? I guess one never does know their destiny, yes bits and pieces but never all. |
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