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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-09-17 02:38 PM

Of earthen tune,
Or borrowed moon,

Wilst thy love flow like a tear?,
Musical sounds whispering into thy ear,

Unto a sparrow and a lark,
Tear does fall that shatters thy heart,

Of lenders or borrowers be,
Of earthen loot,of mystical shores,

Where my fingers play the flute,
Borrowers of time,

Of earhten rhyme,
As I am feeling thy dance of thy foot,

Moonbeams,stars,
Of what is red, what is black or white?,

This magical, mystical night,
Where shadows fall,spirits call,

Lonely into the wooded forest of gloom,
Beneath the darkened trees,

Across thy silvered moon,
Where the swan dances,

To the heartsong of the earthern swamps loon.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 09-17-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-17 02:56 PM

Long time no read...welcome back and thanks for sharing such a magical piece with us. My face brightened to see you back among us. Hope you stay around for awhile. Great read and loved the format and the flow.

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

2 posted 2000-09-18 10:22 PM

In my orison's delight have such engendered emotes swirled upon slight breezes of fancy. Beautiful and wistful, RH...with an interesting flow and format.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-09-18 10:27 PM

RH,

Welcome back my friend!!! Missed you!!! Wonderful poem for your return. So sweet and lyrical. Loved this one.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-09-18 11:12 PM

This is a beautiful love song.....light and airy, like fairies dancing in the forest, while up above the swan dances across the silvered moon...........Wonderful!!!!!! Oh, I do love this one.......

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-09-18 11:55 PM

Romantic one, where have you been???? I've missed your terrific love poetry. Don't you disappear again, ok?????

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2000-09-19 12:24 PM

ah, a fairy princess back in our midst. Your words and presence has been missed.
Thanks for this lovely write to remind us of your sweet words.

Parker

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2000-09-22 12:50 PM

Hi guys!! I have missed all of you like crazy!!!I love you all so much!I just have alot going on right now , but I could never leave my friends and family, hopefully I can be back in full swing of posting and replying when the weather starts to chill outside!
You guys can e-mail me!!!AGAIN THANKS!!! LOVE YA!!!I miss reading everyones poetry!!!!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2000-09-22 01:06 AM

beautifully written..

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