Canadian Wild [Repost from #2]

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Open Poetry #9

Canadian Wild [Repost from #2]

Sunshine

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0 posted 2000-09-22 10:55 AM

Canadian Wild

I would if I could, take a touch of black
a bit of white and gray on my back,
feathers and soft down to make me soar,
and then I would ask for one thing more.

I would if I could, take my forever love
and wing with him ever so high above
tenderly calling out to my life’s mate
together in life, then at heaven’s gate.

I would if I could, be this creature
for this lovely bird has a special feature
the geese mate for life, up to heaven’s door
and for a life’s love, I’d not ask anything more.

©KRJ
22 September, 1999

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1 posted 2000-09-22 10:59 AM

Karilea....WOW!!!! Wish I'd written this one, it is simply beautiful.... Bonnie

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2 posted 2000-09-22 11:25 AM

nicely written..enjoyed..

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-22 12:15 PM

Don't need a whole lot more than that now do we. Wonderful write and I am glad you reposted it. I wasn't here when open 2 was up but I know that I have seen this one before. Must have been a dream or vision lol...sorry to ramble

Trew
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4 posted 2000-09-22 12:48 PM

I must admit that the title drew me in, but the poem was just great! I wasn't around way back in 'Open 2' either, so this is brand new for me! Wonderful images and a beautiful thought!

Trev.

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