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Fairy Tales Can Come True....TEMPTRESS CHALLENGE
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Fairy Tales Can Come True....TEMPTRESS CHALLENGE |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Fairy Tales Can Come True.... It's not easy loving you Maybe that's the "why I do" Anticipating each moment, you are near. Awaiting sight of you Dreams to real, come true Awakening the "Sleeping Beauty" here. Times together shared Never enough dared Wanting more, a never ending need. Moments of treasured hold Kissed by lips of gold A "Once Upon" on each, we both shall feed. A fairy tale come true It's not easy loving you But worth the tender touches then received. Maybe thats the "why I do" Wanting only to be with you Threads of golden memories together weaved. If I were going to need you Share the loving moments true I'd wish a "Cinderella" midnight dance. The fullness of the moon Would lend a glowing tune We'd live happily forever, given "chance". Maureen 9*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very nice read. I have always liked fairy tales. Dreams are good too. I look forward to reading more. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, fairy tales can come true and pure passion can shine through there is laughter beyond your blue In this I send my praise to you *HuGS* for this. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Alan ...yes i think fairy tales can come true..with a little help...  thank you for reading today ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry always love a poetic response..and yes I am trying to be in a lighter mood today...thank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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CAMERON UNDERWOOD Junior Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 26 |
Very nicley written. I loved it. Sometimes love can be hard, but you must endure. For they are your passion in life. As you two become one. Best wishes Sleepless in Portland |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
As long as they dont end in a nightmare as mine has ..and you know all about that. nice write as always M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sleepless in Portland is that anything like "Sleepless in Seattle" I loved that movie..and everything about it... ~~soft thanks for your kind words Maureen *sleepless in southern PA (doesnt quite have the same ring to it) [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I've lived my share of nightmares, Victoria and most of them recently thanks, hon...I appreciate you and your visit...and hope for better times to come your way ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, This is lovely, and I loved reading it. I finally had a little break from work to stop by, and I'm glad that I did. Hope things are well with you. Bill |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hi Bill...things are up and down and inside out at times..but I go with the flow as you can see in my words...I think I am calm enough to read your tale this weekend and give you my opinion...thanks for being so patient...these past two weeks have driven me a bit crazy..and I am trying to have some control here..*it's a bit tough when you have to compete with youth and beauty ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Moonchild, i enjoyed the unique perspective of this poem and the soft, dreamy feel it leaves this reader with  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
kaile thank you...it isn't always easy to love...but without it where would we all be... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Maureen, this is lovely, dreams are a wonderful thing. Don't forget you are beautiful on the inside AS WELL. Dee |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not all fairy tales end in "and they lived happily ever after", but that doesn't meant that they weren't worth living. Wonderful write from you as usual |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A midnight dance sounds wonderful. Here's hoping one day you will have it. Wonderful work. Thanks for taking the challenge. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dee Mark Temptress..thank you all for responding to this poem..I am a little behind on reponses to mine and also to responding to others and I apologize for that..I AM reading but sometimes I don't have the words to reply at the moment..I am just absorbing the wonderful poems and trying to feel what you all are expressing ~~soft hugs and thanks Maureen |
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