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Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-20 06:33 AM

Stupid promises broken,
again and again.
How do I hide the hurt?
How do I stop the pain?
Do you really mean
those soft words for her?
You said them to me
not long ago. Remember?
No more tears will fall,
I refuse to play the part.
You can't hurt me anymore
I've closed off my heart.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

1 posted 2000-09-20 01:49 PM

Dee* The pain of this one is felt deeply...
when we close and lock the door the pain
remains. Great writing...with a tear~

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-09-20 01:54 PM

You've expressed the pain well in these sorrowful words Dee .. this simply aches across the page. Hugs to you.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2000-09-20 03:22 PM

Butterflies dc, if we close the door, doesn't it mean no more pain can come in? Thanks for reading.

Kit, Thanks for the hugs and the comment.

Dee

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-09-20 03:45 PM

Painful read and though a door may be closed there may still be a draft...the only way to really free your heart is to air it out over a period of time. Excellent write.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2000-09-20 03:50 PM

Thank you, Mark. "Excellent" really lifted my spirits.
Dee

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-09-20 03:59 PM

HUGS...Hugs...Hugs

Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2000-09-20 04:07 PM

Thanks Kethry. Hugs back.
Dee

CAMERON UNDERWOOD
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since 2000-08-31

Posts 26

8 posted 2000-09-20 04:18 PM

I feel for you.  I'm going through the same.
Sorry to say you really can't hide the pain or hurt.  I do know you'll get better with time if you let it out and express your self.
But it seems that the amount of time to heal is endless.  You just have to go on, it's all you can do.  You will open your heart again.  I will take some time.
Best wishes to you.

CAMERON UNDERWOOD
Junior Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 26

9 posted 2000-09-20 04:19 PM

I feel for you.  I'm going through the same.
Sorry to say you really can't hide the pain or hurt.  I do know you'll get better with time if you let it out and express your self.
But it seems that the amount of time to heal is endless.  You just have to go on, it's all you can do.  You will open your heart again.  I will take some time.
Best wishes to you.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

10 posted 2000-09-20 04:21 PM

hi DEE...
You've expressed the ache N toll on a heart quite well in this poem my friend...
Managed to bring a tear to my eye...
Thank you for sharing this with us today

Coco

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2000-09-20 04:24 PM

Cameron, thanks for your kind thoughts. It's good to be able to come here and say what I feel without having to go into details. I haven't been a member very long but the support is there anyway.
By the way, this is the first time I've seen your name, so, welcome. I know you'll like Passions, they really are like a family here.
Dee

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

12 posted 2000-09-20 04:26 PM

Coco Baci, you slipped in there while I wasn't looking. Thanks for commenting, believe me it's brought a tear or two to my eye as well.
Dee

nona
Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 139
Fla

13 posted 2000-09-20 06:05 PM

Powerful writing Dee
Glad you are not "playing" the part any more
Sounds like he was the loser here...nona

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

14 posted 2000-09-20 06:28 PM

Dee my heart really goes out to you. This was so full of pain and heartache. Sending you tender hugs my friend.
Juls

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

15 posted 2000-09-20 06:55 PM

nona and Juls,
thank you both for your kind words.
Dee

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

16 posted 2000-09-20 07:21 PM

Dee,

This is so very sad and touchingly written, dear friend.

Love,
Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

17 posted 2000-09-20 07:24 PM

It does my heart good to see you here, Michael, my friend. Thanks for that.
Dee

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