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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2000-09-19 07:12 PM


       “AN ODE TO SUNNY”

One day I was reading poems, on Passions,
      and I came across one,
             that caught my eye…
Someone wrote it I didn’t know, her name was Sunny,
      so I read it and was touched,
             by what the verses implied…

I liked this poem, so I read more of them,
      and came to know,
             that she was a talented poet…
I could see that she wrote, with all of her inner self,
      and then with she,
             I thought about doing a duet…

I read more of her writings, and cherished her words,
      every one of them,
             she had made me a believer…
Then one day I read a certain poem, so very special,
      I knew that this was the one,
             which I wanted to do together…

So I replied to her poem, with my half the answer,
      I tried my darnest fearing,
             perhaps it wouldn’t be acceptable…
And I wrote my heart out, hoping she would like it,
      then the answer came back,
             that it was just beautiful…

A friendship was started, which you see today,
      it’s in our writings together,
             written for everyone…
Sunny and me both, just pouring out the words,
      with myself in amazement,
             of this wonderful person…

I have to say that, she has this so tender heart,
      just read her writings,
             and you will see…
I feel so very lucky, that this humble poet,
      has a chance,
             to write these poems with she…

So now I write with Sunny, we do those duets,
      she is my lovely partner,
             in rhyme…
And I would really, like to say something,
      I’ll write with this marvelous person,
             any ole time…

And she said, that she would write with me,
      and I’ll be her partner,
             in prose…
We will write our hearts out, for we are both poets,
      and all of our poems,
             will seem like beautiful rainbows…


         THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH SUNNY.

         Bill Charles



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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-19 07:21 PM


Bill this sounds like a match made in poetic heaven...James
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-09-19 10:10 PM



Bill...
       I am honored that you would write this for me, and touched by your sincere friendship. You have been my muse, and inspiration........
It is I who must thank you...a better partner I could never find...
                              Sunny
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Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!






[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-20-2000).]

Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-09-19 10:23 PM


how great to be Sunny and share.....


nicely done, sir!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2000-09-20 07:10 PM


Good evening James,
I appreciate you coming by. Sunny is a wonder to work with. Thanks James.

Sunny1
Thank you Sunny, it was something that I just had to do, and I'm glad that you liked it. And thank you for the words that come from your heart.

Good evening Balladeer,
Thank you for your kind comment. And yes, she is a joy to work with.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2000-09-20 07:15 PM


I really like this one. You pleasure at working together shows through.  
Dee

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-09-20 07:16 PM


Alone you shine together you glow.  Well done sir...lovely tribute.
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