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Open Poetry #9

As Taken As The Turn

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-09-20 02:03 AM

As taken
as the turn.
Two twined
to seal the rine
inside
the round, round.

As yellow as the moon,
as water comes so soon,
inturn the round
was deep within my butter gown.

As mouth without seed,
took spell,
a dangled drown.
As brown
of my deep heart
turned to heal the roots
of blame
that caught you from the shallow rain.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-09-20 02:28 AM

RedHeartAngryBraids~
Sweetheart ... you sure can turn a phrase !
Hello there .... how is the great Island of Hawaii ?

Always so wonderful to see your face
and read your poetry.
Be loved ... be happy.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-09-20 02:50 AM

Yes.........you are great!!! I loved this, and keep pumping them out there, so I have lots to read!!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-06-15 08:35 PM

Wow, I love this... Excellent!

Maree

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