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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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 Do you think of me often, as I think of you When the moon is full and the sky's dark blue? When the clouds bring a haze, over moonbeams glow, Do you think of me then, do you wish me to know? In the nighttime of last, as that moon, almost full Broke away from the haze, leaving me in it's pull, I kept following the trail, that my eyes viewed beside, Wanting feelings of knowing, to release them, their hide. When life hurts me most and you've always been there Do you notice the comfort in the words that we share? Do they reach deep within, do they tug at your strings When the slightest of touch, from mine, pleasure bring? All alone in the darkness, no stars seemed to be, Just the blueness surrounding, and cresting their sea. My mind, peaceful stating, intense upon you, When I raise up my eyes, into yours, veiled in blue. Do you know what your kisses, in silence create When you press them to mine, and my hunger, they sate? When the wholeness of you, fills the wholeness of me Do you linger in thoughts, as we subside quietly? The seas of the clouds, their tides taking hold. They swirled, as to choke all the glow of the gold. In passing the beams, appeared voids in this sea, Of the night time in calming, within darkness set free. When releasing my sighs, do you notice my lips Do you see know how I love, when you touch just the tips? Do you see my smile growing, eyes sweeping your face When the nearness of you, pulls me into embrace? Still rounding the bend, in homeward be bound, As the blue thoughts kept rising, as desires surround The moon of my being, missing slice, crescent thin, Tomorrow brings dawn, and will empty, full in. Do you know of my passion, as I watch shadowed eyes When I mirror desires and the moon behind cries? When it loses it's powers, when the light begins rise Do you think of me then, in the dawning of skies? When the tide of emotion has swept over me Will you be my "forever", will you float me your sea? When the calm of your dark, in the midnight of blue Reaches light, waking moments, will you think of me too? MMoonchild 8*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I have, I do , I will all those things and enjoyed think it is great look forward to more |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Prometheus what can I say but thank you, as always ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ 'When life hurts me most and you've always been there Do you notice the comfort in the words that we share? Do they reach deep within, do they tug at your strings When the slightest of touch, from mine, pleasure bring?' All of the above ! What a neat poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Beautiful, as usual MM  {{HUGZ}} TK |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Marge..I was riding home from dinner with a cousin..got lost as usual... I am awful in the Dark when driving with all the PA highway work...and after 30 min in the wrong direction I started home but kept seeing the moon out my window..and the shaded blue with gray clouds shadowing..so I did as all poets do ...I took paper and pen and wrote in the dark on my lap and tried to decipher it all day yesterday to make sense of my scribbles...and well this was it... ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*sigh* very beautiful moving imagery....there is a full moon tonight....when i look up im going to think of this beautiful poem! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ThUnDeRkYsS thank you...very very much ~~softly smiling MM (which stands for many moons ago....) not really MaureenMoonchild |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
"WOW" my favorite, you are goooood! where abouts in pa are you from? i was born near pittsburg myself but i live in minnesota now, i miss it. got to get to your next poem, see ya latter! John |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dawn..actually it was a 98% Moon last night..I went out at midnight to snap it's pic but I need a better digital camera I think....and it may explain my necessity and build up of writing right now....it's the moon's pull of me ~~smiling a thank you M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
John...I live on the Mason Dixon Line, the PA/MD border...that's at the bottom or South Central thank you for enjoying my words ~~smiles Maureen |
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