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Cinderella For Sarah
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Cinderella For Sarah |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*~ She came entrancing everglancing *where she* had been ~*~*~*~ ~*~A lady regally~*~ *~* attired in just *~* ~~ the loveliest ~~ ~~ of dress ~~ ** ~ ~ ~ ~ never ~ ~ ~ ~ ** more lovely as she waltz danced round room would be partners sign her dance card anticipating her charms and sighing when their names graduated to the top of her list what a night it was a night of beauty and of charming chance so easily taken until one in particular was taken with her easy charm and was captured by the delight of holding a princess forevermore in his life the world stood still for him for her forever and ever *Sarah is my mentor student who cannot speak with words, but is very animated in her belief in fairy tales coming true. Sarah, love ... this is your lady. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~My goodness Marge,....you are incredible!!! This is stunning. Absolutely. How sweet. How very artistic. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, YOU are Sarah's lady....an my fairy tale.This is wonderful!!! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
WoW, Marge! This is beautiful! Your talent leaves me speechless.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, this is so touching, beautifully penned, dear lady! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Thank you ! I'll be the first to admit that the words came easy ... the formatting was a WENCH ! Wheeeeeeeew ! She's worth it ! Balladeer~ Ever hear of fairytales coming true ?  Love ya' TennesseeAngel~ Thank you. I don't know about speechless, but this one left me breathless ! Now where is Serenity with that Tylenol ? Corinne~ Thank you, hon. I'm floating right now at getting it done. Sarah will be sooooooo tickled. Sarah is the beauty - this one was the BEAST ! Thanks everyone ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- wow! you've done it again. this is amazing. sarah is very fortunateto have someone as special as you care so much about her. thanks for sharing this.  love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay you....you know that I have been trying for hours now trying to accept this challenge in silence but you know what.....I just dont feel right about dressing up a cyber doll with my words....lol..yeah that's it...see just being a gentleman.  Marge my friend....I now KNOW the pain you went through to create this one and I commend you on the creativity and style but the words say so much much more and that is what counts...so congrats to you for sitting me down....(not down for the count though).lol....Beautiful my friend just as beautiful as you and Sarah. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lovely Marge...beautiful to wake up to... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* You are every childs dream come true...weaving a fairy tale for such a sweet hearted little girl...**tears in my eyes** We need not hear to know the beauty of the music...big ((hugs)) to you...and to Miss Sarah~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Thank you. Children have only to ask and I'm putty on the page ! Their smiles are worth it all. MarkB~ And you ARE a gentleman ! So are ya' trying to tell me that you're cyber-doll challenged ! LOL ! Sarah will like knowing you like it. Maureen~ Thanks, Hon. Glad you found the smile. ButterfliesDC~ *Hugs* sent your way just for who you are. Love ya' Thanks to all of you. ~*Marge*~ and Sarah ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And YOU my dear, are such a wonderful fairy Godmother!!!!! What a beautiful poem for Sarah, I just don't know how you do it all Marge! Bonnie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Love the formatting!! It is wonderful!! Sarah is a lucky lady to have such a talented and caring mentor. Wonderful writing my friend!! Hi to Sarah too!! Hope all her dreams come true. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--you may write a tale or two, but your heart is true blue...wonderful!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet, Marge, and soooooo creative!! I love it!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ What a sweet thought. Bippity-Boppity-Boo ! LoneWolf~ I'm the lucky one and Sarah is a dream ! Martie~ Thanks, doll. Denise~ I sure appreciate knowing you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Poems in rainbows - Poems in ball gowns Poems in overflowing wine glasses this may be the most loving - and I am in awe I agree with Mark - I won't be attempting any such page dressing - but my admiration for and appreciation of you and your lovely words is unending |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, You are an artist with a most unusual gift for words. Your work is awesome. Deb [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
marge! wow! this is amazing and how lucky sarah is to have you as her friend! hugs, dg i'm growin' i dont like it i'm growin' and it hurts i love you but i'm tired i guess i've got a lot to learn -w. watson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Thank you soooooo much. I appreciate you. I apologize for not getting back to these responses sooner. BloomingRose~ Thank you very much for your sweet comments. DG~ I thank you, my friend. And I must repeat - I am the lucky one to have this Sarah-ella in my life ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeowzah! This is beautiful! You have a touch, dear lady....a touch. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
THANK YOU, sweet Ed~ Just this night ... sitting with my little Delaney as we unfolded the story of Cinderella ... I remembered my little Sarah and all she'd been through in the short of her lifetime ... Sarah ... you were and are, love to fill my heart~  How blessed I feel to be able to read the story of Cinderella with Delaney and have her fully enjoy each moment of it~ This ~Poet~ is sooooo fortunate~ ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< Email noles1@totcon.com |
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