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Drifting Off In Dream
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Drifting Off In Dream |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Tenderly she thinks of him, She hears his laughter and she smiles. Her heart is caressed by his words, Tender, caring sentiments of love. Memories dance and spin in her head, With his voice she waltzs. The room is aglow from candles soft flame, Closing her eyes she whispers his name. Sleep finds her now, Carrying her to him in dream. Upon wings of love they will soar, Off to their secret place, their passions to explore. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A romantic and a beautiful dream...you are blessed to be the one to hold this dream...James |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
James thank you so much. Sometimes dreams are what we survive on huh? Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Juls, this has to be among the best poems that I've seen from you. . . obviously you are very happy. . . I am happy for you my friend. . .  Wonderful poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It's so great to see someone's happiness come through in their poetry! How refreshing! I loved it! sp  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Snowpants, your reply was so sweet, thank you so much. Yes I'm terribly happy. And hey if it's all just a dream please don't wake me up...lol. Juls |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Talk about painting a picture of contentment!!! What a lucky fellow....and a lucky you....beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ Wow, girl ! This is just the loveliest presentation of dreamy thoughts. You've outdone your self here. It is sooooooooooooooooooo pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Juls-You know that I love to see you happy and I am so very elated for you. This shows your contentment, your heart, and your glow.....my sincere wishes for you as this grows and believe me it couldn't happen for a sweeter lady than one such as yourself. This is definitely MY favorite of yours and will go in my library. See you made it past all of my strict criteria...ROFL....I do believe that happiness brings out the best in your muse. Hugs to you my friend. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww 'Deer how kind of you to say. I feel pretty lucky. Thanks my friend. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oopppss see you done made me smile so big that I forgot to check that little box ...so here you go...click.................. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge get over here so I can give you a big ole hug, southern style of course. Now remember those can last forever,lol. Thank you my sweet sweet friend. Love you bunches girl. Mark what can I say to you? I love you so much and I know when I'm happy you're happy. You're such a great friend to me and I'll forever cherish that friendship. Hugs right back to ya. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Sigh*~ Oh what a perfect dream this is, and a wonderful poem to boot. I'm not really sure what it is tonight, but I've read a few poems that seem to "fit" right into what my thoughts have been lately, and this is one of them! Superb Juls! ~Sheri |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Irie thanks so much for your kind words. I can take no credit though, all comes from my inspiration. Juls |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Juliet, this is lovely. It's nice to "see" your smiles through it. Dee |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Thank the stars for the dreams they send...and yeppers those dreams do come true every now and then...if we let them  A very beautiful piece with the music of your tender heart playing the back ground....excellent work~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dee you got that right, I was smilin big time...lol. Thanks for stoppin in. Butterflies dreams can come true can't they? Where would we be without the hope of our dreams? Thanks for always being so sweet girly. |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Wowie-Zowie! Somebody had a little impact, methinks! "She hears his laughter and she smiles." That, to me, is one true indicator of love. I know that I can be a bear, but if I hear her laugh... it gets me every time. Wonderful poem Juls. Made me smile! Trev. There are thoughts which are prayers. There are moments when, whatever the posture of the body, the soul is on its knees. ~~Victor Hugo~~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely and magical portrait you've penned here Juls ... the happiness shines through every line. Just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Trev methinks you are correct. Someone did have just a small impact on me,...lol. How could ya tell?..hehe. And you keep on smilin, looks good on ya. Awww Kit what a sweet thing to say. Thanks so much. |
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