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Sweet Refrain
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Sweet Refrain |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sweet Refrain Often I have touched you On the other side of the blue And this feeling that I feel Is only sweet because of you You are the whisper I keep hearing Through the quiet of the moon Your words have made me hunger And the thoughts of you consume I'm a servant to your cravings On my knee's I'd surely beg Oh, I want your sinful cooing Oh, I want you darling Red By the Ocean in the morning Under the stars I'll kiss your neck I hear an Emerald Island calling And I'll love you by Stonehedge You've lifted me in sweet refrain Renewed my gift of pen… And in this searching heart of mine You name is deeply embed. James Parker Haley Aug 30. 2000 |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Parker this is really beautiful. So much feeling here. Juls |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautifully written Parker...A tender and graceful weave of the heart~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Juls, thank you.  Butterflies, thank you very much too. Parker |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"You are the whisper I keep hearing Through the quiet of the moon" Parker, how'd you do that??? That is a poetic line among lines, dear. This piece is tranquil, yet sensually searing. I love it! ~ Claire < !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oooh tis a lovely verse!  ~H |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, outdoing yourself again I see? This is absolutely wonderful and is now firmly ensconced in my library... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Parker...what a sweet refrain of poetry this is |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh my, oh my, oh my! Did I say Oh My? Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so im cold busted... i dont care... i want this poem in my personal library... pretend i wasnt here.... as i *sigh* and *swoon* my AWOL self on out of here....  back to rehab... and i know ... the wardens gonna take away my raspberry tea  lollike i told ya p-man.... this is sooooo perfect... pedestal poetry..for sure later-sweetly inspired gator me |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, thank you, searingly. X... thank you my dear poet flirtasiously... SunShine, thank you very much for that. Hoot, so nice to see you about again. thanks sweet poet for responding. Corinne, I kind of like the way you said that... Janet, thank you.. but get back to your life or I may have to put you over my knee... Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am sorry but I just noticed this one. Too wrapped up in myself today I think...... Well, I see your pen has not lost any ink for swooning!! LOL This is a very gentle and soft poem James, I like it very much. Of course it is no Gaurdian of Forever or Petals of the White Rose. LOL .....but for me ...they would be hard to beat!! Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Good greif man, this is sooooo romantic.....Several sighs...... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Parker, What are you doing to this heart of mine?........This was so tender and sweet and just so, so, so, perfect. Thanks for making the heart smile.. and sigh.. It needed it. I enjoy reading your work very much. Take CareJenn E |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, well thank you for that. SEA, thank you, gotta like those multiple sighs..... Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Jenn E, sweetheart, you are very very welcome. sorry missed you when I replied... and this thing is acting funny... Parker |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Long sigh escapes sonjes...beautiful...how many times has that been said already? Oh, who cares...I think this is an incredibly romantic piece with hope and love...oops, another sigh is coming on. < !signature-->Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem... very well written...deep and true If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Fantastic as usual! I really like your opening lines... "Often I have touched you On the other side of the blue" Neat!!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
sonjes, never enough sighs for me, of course I'd prefer them in person. AVANTI, thank you... ladysixstring, thank you very much, too bad I'm not any good at opening pickup lines... Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
beautiful parker..the stuff dreams are made of! sigh(and that seems to be the general feeling here!!).....wish someone would write for me such a love letter.... hugs, dg i'm growin' i dont like it i'm growin' and it hurts i love you but i'm tired i guess i've got a lot to learn -w. watson |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dreams penned upon pages of blue coming from you of late. Very beautifully rendered. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, you sure know how to paint em you know? could feel every word of this....and yep am with clair...those lines could make you some money...they are great |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sounds like a song to me Parker..very nice rhythm.. |
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