Open Poetry #9 |
Doors and Windows |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
We talk, write, and think, we often use Analogies of windows and doors Through windows in souls we do see clues Passing though doors to other floors Or sometimes we dwell on the rain Or the door is locked, our love is blocked Rain on the pane reflects our pain Time runs out and we've been clocked Mundane subjects may try to ensue Clutter my mind, the knowledge of Yet smoldering fervor I find in you Behind your door I know lurks love This then is far beyond our controls And the door we are stepping through Is the door to our hearts and souls It is September not May, it's a clue We've viewed through windows seen true love we know Should not until December just look in Seen lasting love bright with ardor's glow Grasp it we must for it's surely no sin Sad that young April was not when we met Sadder the summer saw other mates claim We shouldn't let Fall go feeling regret But let our lips join and our passion's tame Windows and doors, seasons and seasons I only know that I've met you now My love goes far beyond reasons So please on me your love endow < !signature--> ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I liked this much, season's window's and doors how wonderfuly tied If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I wish you good fortune with your new love...and may I add, I smiled... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--I like the idea of windows and doors...because they happen through out life, don't they...some are locked and some open automatically... Another look at romance through your eyes and heart...Lovely! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Tori- you caught it just as intended - thank you ~S~ Karilea- Some fantasies never become realities - but we dream them nonetheless Thanks Martie- sometimes I think - I'm waiting by the airport door for my ship to come in - Thanks |
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