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More Human Than Human
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More Human Than Human |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
more human than human you sing me a song in the sweet sound of triumph. more human that human you need to hear the words that were lost along the way. more human than human you want to feel that warm breeze around your troubled heart. More human that human your torturous eyes are filled with tears of longing. More human than human you don't need to be afraid of the ghosts that haunt you. More human than human you grow to imagine what it was like to smile without a grimace of pain. More human than human you absorb the world around and in a great ease you make the oblivion dissapear in to the dark night More human than human you turn in to the stars that shine so brilliantly in the cold of shadowy world. More human than human you understand.... In a vivid reality that was created by yours truly More human than human... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW.....I am feeling mighty human right now and actually loving it!!!!  Beautiful verse from you. I am so glad that you have joined us here. Great flow and message and perfect cadence. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
BirdeeB I echo what Mark said. This was an excellent write. I glad that I was man/human enough to read it.(LOL)  Garfield |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
birdeeB, wow this was a superhuman effort. Well done. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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