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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-18 09:47 PM


Kansas Skies [Tri Haiku]

wide and beckoning
always holds a reckoning
of life with promise

blue to pinkening
Kansas skies are twinkling
air still pure and yours

Kansas skies a cure
country values kind and sure
wide and beckoning

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
18 September, 2000




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-18-2000).]

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Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-09-18 09:49 PM



A beautiful tribute haiku to Kansas!  Your pen is magic, this is unique and clever!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-09-19 07:11 AM


Kansas skies adorned
once were mine to share in eye
now reside in heart

country born and raised
values met in love and care
friendships eternal

twinkling eyes shine
upon pink and blue promise
purity assured





[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-19-2000).]
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3 posted 2000-09-19 07:23 AM


Karilea~
Well, I think I'll coin this one a Tri-ku !

Love the beauty in it ... and the beauty in YOU !
~*Marge*~


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Nan
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4 posted 2000-09-19 07:32 AM


Nice job, K... I like the way you brought everything right back in a full "wide and beckoning" hai-circle...
Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-09-19 10:09 AM


Melissa, thanks for checking in...

Mark, country folk think alike, no?

Marge...can I borrow your coin?

Nan, always good to see you, thanks for reading!

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2000-09-19 10:54 AM


These haikus are wonderful.  I can see the Kansas plain beckoning me.  Yikes!  Help me!  I love these haikus, but my toe-tapping days are here again!  Help!!!!  A response is coming on!!!
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7 posted 2000-09-19 10:57 AM


What a lovely trio that graces passions pages this morning   Beautiful haikus  
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8 posted 2000-09-19 12:23 PM


Amazing. . . simply amazing. . . your talent just leaves me in awe. . .

Wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . when's the next plane leave for Kansas??  

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9 posted 2000-09-19 12:43 PM


Ah, sunshine, this is wonderful.  Feels like home to me.  Great Job!!!  

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Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-09-19 01:50 PM


TA, if it sounds like home...welcome!  Thanks!
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