Open Poetry #9 |
Kansas Skies [Tri Haiku] |
Sunshine
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Kansas Skies [Tri Haiku] wide and beckoning always holds a reckoning of life with promise blue to pinkening Kansas skies are twinkling air still pure and yours Kansas skies a cure country values kind and sure wide and beckoning ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 18 September, 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-18-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful tribute haiku to Kansas! Your pen is magic, this is unique and clever! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kansas skies adorned once were mine to share in eye now reside in heart country born and raised values met in love and care friendships eternal twinkling eyes shine upon pink and blue promise purity assured [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Well, I think I'll coin this one a Tri-ku ! Love the beauty in it ... and the beauty in YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice job, K... I like the way you brought everything right back in a full "wide and beckoning" hai-circle... |
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Sunshine
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Melissa, thanks for checking in... Mark, country folk think alike, no? Marge...can I borrow your coin? Nan, always good to see you, thanks for reading! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
These haikus are wonderful. I can see the Kansas plain beckoning me. Yikes! Help me! I love these haikus, but my toe-tapping days are here again! Help!!!! A response is coming on!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a lovely trio that graces passions pages this morning Beautiful haikus |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amazing. . . simply amazing. . . your talent just leaves me in awe. . . Wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . when's the next plane leave for Kansas?? ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, sunshine, this is wonderful. Feels like home to me. Great Job!!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Sunshine
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TA, if it sounds like home...welcome! Thanks! |
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